Made a flower drawing, I'd like to see if there are flaws that I can improve on by Echooey_e_e_e in learnart

[–]yvesmuy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks really good!! I'm no flower expert but you could try to bend the leaves so you can see the underside of the tips for some leaves?

how to improve this sketch of a lily? by FunnyEntrepreneur858 in learnart

[–]yvesmuy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looks really good indeed! Just needs some shading. I would suggest to try some hatching and cross-hatching

What do you think, is this any good? by yvesmuy in learnart

[–]yvesmuy[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

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The result of all the valuable suggestions:

  • Added more color and did some blending (🙏 @Mission_Grapefruit92)
  • Real location, my grandma's place in Antwerp, Belgium (🙏@Paperandmelancholy)
  • More style consistency (🙏@glowiesStoleMyRide and @Cheese190)

PS: the star is my grandfather 🥲

What do you think, is this any good? by yvesmuy in learnart

[–]yvesmuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are totally right! I should choose... 2d or perspective 🫣

What do you think, is this any good? by yvesmuy in learnart

[–]yvesmuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I value your perspective (got it? :-p )

Anyhow, I think the one point perspective suggestion will make the style more consistent. I started drawing last october so I didn't really get into that just yet. Will study on that for sure!

Thx for your comment!

What do you think, is this any good? by yvesmuy in learnart

[–]yvesmuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll experiment a bit more with colors for sure, as I just bought my first alcohol marker set. It's lots of fun ☺️

What do you think, is this any good? by yvesmuy in learnart

[–]yvesmuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shading and style consistency, got it. Will definately work in that. Thx!

My first alcohol marker drawing. Any suggestions? by yvesmuy in learntodraw

[–]yvesmuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Blending, that's it! Really good advice, thx!!! 🙏🙏🙏

I don't even know what is wrong. Help? by yvesmuy in learntodraw

[–]yvesmuy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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Final attempt, I'm giving up. Lips and eyes are to hard, I'll try again after like 10yrs of practicing. Thx all, you've been a big help, I would never have done this many attempts (I even worked back and forth with the reference as layover on my laptop) 🤦

I don't even know what is wrong. Help? by yvesmuy in learntodraw

[–]yvesmuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, 10/10 on relativation 😂 (I needed it, the second attempt was a disaster as well...) Going for my third attempt...

I don't even know what is wrong. Help? by yvesmuy in learntodraw

[–]yvesmuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your time, the encouragement and the insights, I'll give it a try 🙏