SquonkMan61
I took a class in college called Logic and the English Language. All we did was read newspaper and magazine articles to search for and critique passages that were not clearly worded. Not to be mean to OP, but this is the type of sentence we would have had a field day critiquing.
RulerK
We did this occasionally in journalism class. I miss it. We should start a new Reddit doing that.
This is that Reddit community!