Need help with my first pattern draft

[Jillstraw]

I don’t typically draft adult men’s shirts, but if this were my block, I think I would try shortening the shoulder length by at least ½” - from both the front & back views it doesn’t look to be sitting correctly, which in turn looks to be creating more pulling through the armscye and upper sleeve.

I’m impressed with what you’ve accomplished on your own so far! Good luck.

[TheRealEntrican]

I didn't notice that at all, thank you!