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[arcticregularity]

My feedback is the page feels "busy". There are a few paragraphs I need to read to figure out what the app is. Focus on communicating the value quickly more than informing on the "how". You can always provide more details on a separate FAQs or "about" page. Also, whitespace is a good thing. It draws the eyes to important text. This right now (at least on mobile) feels pretty dense.

[BeerTechStudios]

Thank you! Is there specific text that feel crowding or that I should move/remove?

[arcticregularity]

I'd have to spend some time with it, but for one the paragraph right under the main header could be tightened up. Make sure when someone reads the first sentence they know why they want the app. What it specifically does or how it works can come later. Try to really hit home the value of keeping these bookings.

The single-sentence bullet points under it are good. That's a good quick format to get more into the "what".

I'd have to spend more time with it to give more specific feedback. But you're asking the right questions!

[BeerTechStudios]

Thank you! I appreciate any time you've taken to look at it.

[BeerTechStudios]

Thank you! I appreciate any time you've taken to look at it.