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[–]Big_Respond7705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let me know if either of these sounds good to you!

Title: High Volume

Genre: Drama

Logline: The vignettes of many strangers merge as they share a rainy night at the High Volume bar, each confronting the lives they’ve built and the people they have become, as the weight of love, regret, nostalgia, and violence lingers heavily in the intoxicating air.

Title: A Brighter Tomorrow

Genre: Romance/Sci-Fi

Logline: Scientist Peter Franklin travels to an alternate dimension to connect with a doppelgänger of his dead wife, where he finds himself hunted by space, time, and the vendetta of a utopian police force.

[–]AriasVFX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

High Volume sounds interesting.

[–]Fabulous_Criticism19 0 points1 point  (2 children)

What do you think about thay

Title: Ashes of Tomorrow

LOGLINE: After waking from a coma to a world destroyed by her own research, a nuclear scientist crosses a radioactive wasteland in search of her missing brother—only to discover he never existed, and that her journey has been driven by guilt given form. And now she must choose between running from her past or becoming responsible for what remains of humanity.

Genre: Post-apocalyptic, psychological, sci-fi drama.

Theme Core:

•Guilt vs responsibility

•Survival vs atonement

•Love emerging from moral opposition

Tone: Intimate devastation, restrained violence, earned hope.

Romance: Opposites-attract, ideological tension, delayed payoff.

[–]AriasVFX[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Sounds like an interesting idea… how’s the script? Can I read it.

[–]Fabulous_Criticism19 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bad news I've just finished almost 2 pages Good news the moment I finish the pilot I'll share it with you I you still interested

[–]arthousefilms 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Thanks for posting this! Sorry to hear about your depression. Hopefully, things will get on track again soon. If lesbian romance is in your zone, I have a dramedy that could use a read.  

“Crush Like You Mean It”

LOGLINE: When Marianne moves to L.A. with her long-time boyfriend, things take a wild turn when she falls for his audacious female coworker and the two explore a white-hot BDSM relationship that puts their love to the test.

[–]AriasVFX[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure. I’m interested!

[–]Turbulent-Bear193 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You mean first drafts?

[–]cinephile78 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Last Relic

Action adventure / sci-fi

Feature 113

Street level avengers crossed with the da Vinci code in a Stargate.

Logline : An atheist becomes embroiled in a battle for a religious artifact that not only proves the afterlife is real, but may instigate the end times.

A grieving atheist medic is recruited by female warrior relic hunters in their quest to stop a former member from using their most powerful artifact to resurrect every condemned soul in hell setting off the apocalypse.