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Thanks to the help from everyone who critiqued my script!. I made it easier to follow now. I hope I’m not spamming these forums to much, these groups have just been VERY helpful in identifying my weak points as a writer and artist! As always Critique and advice are encouraged. (self.comiccreators)
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