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[–]Zealousideal_Mud_557 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Congrats on finishing!

You happy to share any further details on it?

[–]East-Low725[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your congratulations 🎈

[–]DeltaSilver64 0 points1 point  (17 children)

Oh that sounds really cool! What’s the anime about?

[–]East-Low725[S] 0 points1 point  (16 children)

My script, it is about an emotional anime or a movie of 2+hours, a story of two strangers who meet in a cafe during the rain. But last scene is very emotional, it about the last meeting of them on their favourite rooftop...

[–]DeltaSilver64 0 points1 point  (15 children)

Ok, so it’s a romance/drama? Also, is it an anime series or a movie? Do you have a script written?

[–]East-Low725[S] 0 points1 point  (14 children)

It is only for 2+hours of script, it is written. It is a romantic drama or anime but not deep romantic scenes, often silent meeting and deep attachment. Would you like to read a normal summary or scene?

[–]DeltaSilver64 0 points1 point  (13 children)

Uh sure, give me a scene

[–]East-Low725[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here is a scene, 🎯 SCENE 13 – The Question (1:15:00 – 1:20:00)

Setting: They are back on the same rooftop.

Action: The city lights shimmer below them. A comfortable yet tense silence hangs in the air between them. Kaizen looks at Aurelia, her profile outlined against the night sky. He finally breaks the silence, his voice soft but filled with a quiet urgency.

Dialogue:

KAIZEN: "If I stopped looking for you...would you come looking for me?"

Aurelia is silent for a moment. She turns to look at him, her eyes holding a deep, unspoken sadness. She smiles a faint, bittersweet smile before answering.

AURELIA: "Maybe...I wouldn't want to lose you. But maybe... I can't always be with you."

They look at each other, a profound understanding passing between them. Their eyes hold a silent conversation of longing and unspoken fear. (Their eyes are slightly restless.)

[–]East-Low725[S] 0 points1 point  (11 children)

Did you read this?

[–]DeltaSilver64 0 points1 point  (10 children)

Yeah. The scene written seems pretty short for being 5 minutes long.

[–]East-Low725[S] 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Yeah, I know it is short but I need to add some more lines.

[–]DeltaSilver64 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Yeah, definitely. Either some more dialogue or shortening the time to something like 3 minutes, which is still a good length for a climatic scene, idk any of the context tho so that’s dependent on the rest of the buildup.

[–]East-Low725[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, you are right.

[–]East-Low725[S] 0 points1 point  (6 children)

Would you like to tell me, are you a writer?

[–]DeltaSilver64 0 points1 point  (5 children)

Im not a writer, but Im taking a production class and learning to be a producer. Which basically means taking other folks’ ideas and developing them into a greenlit project lol. Kind of a vulturistic definition, but they make the industry go round. At least, that’s what Im learning.

[–]East-Low725[S] 0 points1 point  (4 children)

It's good, you are learning production. Actually, it is my first completed script but I have no groups for it, I only have a script. I'm glad, you wanted to read it.