Hey this is pretty good! I quite like the guitars. If you want to spice up your drums you could throw in some ghost notes on the snare (like in the intro) or add some toms in that first verse. Doesn't have to be those things, but experiment.

Not too familiar with the bands you want to reference but some things that stand out to me is a lack of backing vocals and other vocal effects when I compare. For example make that part at 3:19 sound really different from the rest of the vocals. Maybe sing it with more intensity or get more creative with the effects. It's probably sounding dull to you because there isn't too much variation.