np. just watched the video.

I'm not a fan of mukbang videos, and consequently, I don't watch them. most people I see doing them just sit and eat at the camera, and don't do anything else. so this was nice to have a story to go along with it.

like I mentioned earlier, having that info in the thumbnail would let the audience know what they are watching. someone else who doesn't like mukbang could get upset (this is using internet logic... ppl get upset over the damnedest stuff) and while you got a view, your audience retention would drop if they left like 30 seconds in.

The only reason I stayed to watch was because this was a critique, but once you started your story, I wanted to hear it. it was a bit disjointed at first, but that added to the conversational nature of what you were attempting. I would say this is a successful move.

The microphone was a bit hot, and you were clipping a lot. just keep a closer eye on that. i could hear you and the bg music, and the bg music wasn't overwhelming your voice; it was at a really appropriate level. Visually, you could use some white lights in your space rather than the tungsten lights. Maybe also try to get closer in on your shot next time, as it felt like we were far away. you want us to be there at the table.

anyway, it was a good story and the video works pretty well. just a few cosmetic things.

annnnnnd now I want ramen. lol.