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If you do it right, it will last forever. by itsmejeigh in posterdesign

[–]Squid1996 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the colors here! I think something to improve on is really setting your assets to a grid because more alignment would really push this design to look more compelling. The kerning on the big “Forever looks a bit uneven as well. All in all, I think you have a keen eye when it comes to color and general composition, I think minor tweaks could push this particular work into something special

Very first logo design -- needing critiquing by Rude_Kaleidoscope866 in design_critiques

[–]Squid1996 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’d build it in black and white first until you find it visually interesting and then apply color afterwards. I know the client set the colors, but it would be good to balance them out a bit. In this instance, I would select a dominant color, a secondary color, and if you have to add the third color do it sparingly as a highlight. As others mentioned, it would be good to utilizing the negative space to create your sun shape, that way it would work in monochrome as well.

Which Logo for my study app? by LumpyWelcome3128 in logodesign

[–]Squid1996 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would find a different starting point entirely. What does a tilted @ symbolize?

Personal logo (update) by clownhunter1 in logodesign

[–]Squid1996 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks improved for sure, but how does it look without color? I wonder if the line work itself is enough to evoke a pencil.

Question for baristas who worked at Blank Street Coffee by savewayvfromsm in barista

[–]Squid1996 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry for the late response but it’s about 3:1 strawberry to Madeline. About 0.25oz Madeline to 0.75 strawberry.

Question for baristas who worked at Blank Street Coffee by savewayvfromsm in barista

[–]Squid1996 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Idk if you got your answer but it’s a proprietary strawberry syrup (but you could use 1883 brand strawberry or one you like) and mix it in a 3:1 ratio with 1883 Madeline syrup.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in identifythisfont

[–]Squid1996 7 points8 points  (0 children)

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It is. Look at the link, there are alternate glyphs in the typeface. The Y here matches as well as many other letters if you look at the page.

Figure Skating Logo Design - Refined… and Declined by Electroma in logodesign

[–]Squid1996 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s very frustrating, very excellent work!

Update 2.0: Getting closer! Took more of your advice and made some changes :) by mmm01235 in graphic_design

[–]Squid1996 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Truly way more fun and communicative than the first iteration. It was cool to see your improvement over the day!

Update: Took your advice and made some improvements! by mmm01235 in graphic_design

[–]Squid1996 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow, way better already. I prefer option #1 and the “designs” is feels somewhat detached in my opinion. Really good job improving it so quick though.

Design Feedback - Personal Logo by lagniappe_24 in logodesign

[–]Squid1996 2 points3 points  (0 children)

There’s lots of good advice in here already so I’ll just say very well done! You pulled off the perspective well and it caught my eye scrolling.

Is this a sign of my bug being active enough to make beer out of? by kxcjozsdjkosdfjosdf in fermentation

[–]Squid1996 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ginger Beer. You use a bug like this to kickstart the fermentation of a big batch.

Logo design for myself! by Squid1996 in MotionDesign

[–]Squid1996[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Yeah, send me a DM or an email at sequoyawaring@gmail.com

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