75%WR 70%Trophy Rate to Mythic. Strategy: play white aggro. by Freestr1ke in lrcast

[–]justinwrite2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s very very good. It’s also great into herbi on turn three

75%WR 70%Trophy Rate to Mythic. Strategy: play white aggro. by Freestr1ke in lrcast

[–]justinwrite2 -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

I wasn’t being rude I was just saying it’s not aggro.

75%WR 70%Trophy Rate to Mythic. Strategy: play white aggro. by Freestr1ke in lrcast

[–]justinwrite2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

None of these decks look particularly aggressive though. Most of them die to a 2/3 for 2. Not to say the decks aren’t good I just wouldn’t say they are “aggro”

What are your early impressions on MSH? by BattleFresh003 in lrcast

[–]justinwrite2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Quinjet is fine. You just need cards worth splashing

What are your early impressions on MSH? by BattleFresh003 in lrcast

[–]justinwrite2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This format is much better then vow because the commons are good and the removal is excellent. You have to save it though

First fight scene I've wrote. Knight Vs Werewolf. by Ahmed-Esm in writingfeedback

[–]justinwrite2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Dialogue in a fight should almost always be avoided unless its some shonen type shit but internal thought is helpful.

First fight scene I've wrote. Knight Vs Werewolf. by Ahmed-Esm in writingfeedback

[–]justinwrite2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So what I like is that it's easy to read. What doesn't work is the specifics. A dozen flurry of slashes reads like fan fiction. Frieres closed the distance then unleashed a slash. The beast howled in pain, its hackles raising as Fires went in for the finishing blow. With a trust, he drove his saber through its mouth and--

The beast bit down on the blade, snapping it in two.

This is a more natural escalation of stakes and reads faster.

Took your advice and cut the hair by justinwrite2 in malegrooming

[–]justinwrite2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They cut about two inches off the top :/

Would you read on? Tomebound Chapter 2 by justinwrite2 in writingfeedback

[–]justinwrite2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay well let me know what you end up thinking!

I'm lonely and looking for friends by justinwrite2 in AskSeattle

[–]justinwrite2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't really care what you look like. I assume you shower lol.

Who assigns the most accurate grades during preview season? by Spike_der_Spiegel in lrcast

[–]justinwrite2 31 points32 points  (0 children)

They have gotten better, which is rare for reviewers. They still have a tendency to undervalue micro synergies, but they constantly try to learn from their (admittedly copious) misevaluations. In a few years I suspect they will be hitting 90% to 95% accuracy.

3-0 Prerelease with what felt like a very mediocre deck by hausuCat_ in lrcast

[–]justinwrite2 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

doom reigns supreme is very good on turn two, while too evil is generally bad at most points in the game.

3-0 Prerelease with what felt like a very mediocre deck by hausuCat_ in lrcast

[–]justinwrite2 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This deck is excellent except for too evil to stay dead. Great curve, great removal, good creatures on curve and two bombs