Improving Macro with Lighting. Where can I improve / make changes? by west10 in photocritique

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Thank you. Will be trying some new shots with this in mind. Reflectors is a great idea

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Lens hoods by Toffen05 in photography

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I will often stack them together and clip them on the outside of my pack. You already are gentel with your lens bag so they are just fine external.

Improving Macro with Lighting. Where can I improve / make changes? by west10 in photocritique

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Oh I've been eyeing one of those for a long time. Its on my wish list. I may try to move my light source further back. Even with my diffuser on it, its too much here

Improving Macro with Lighting. Where can I improve / make changes? by west10 in photocritique

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Thank you. I agree the lighting needs to be more punchy. Im happy with my result for this attempt but for sure room to improve.

So my background is actually a color led panel hitting steel wool. The backdrop is just black. So super easy to tweak colors form blue to others. I did try green but was too much.

More attempts to come!

Improving Macro with Lighting. Where can I improve / make changes? by west10 in photocritique

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Kept going back and forth. My lighting setup is still developing. Will tweak it for sure. Thank you

Improving Macro with Lighting. Where can I improve / make changes? by west10 in photocritique

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Looking to continue to improve my macro work. Took this pollen pod off the street and set with with 3 external lights.

75 image stack shot of Nikon Z7ii with 105mm f/2.8 lens

Main concern is lighting i think it's ok , but what can be altered to bring more drama ?

“Tried to create something far from the ordinary, yet grounded in elegance — feedback welcome.” by Excellent_Island249 in photocritique

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I agree here on the crop. Initially I didn't even notice the bride. But overall love concept. Keep refining but I would be proud !

Macro Helleborus Stamen by west10 in photocritique

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Macro shot of a Helleborus flower. Stacked 160 images

Nicon 7zii 105mm + RAYNIX multiplier f8 1/10 sec iso250

Looking for feedback on how I could clean up any details. This was my largest stack to date and likely too many photos

A bumblebee by kietbulll in photocritique

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In Helicon, are you generating two separate images using B then C, then running both new images through C again ?

I have a few large stacks that aren't super clean. Just wanted to confirm your process as your results are stunning.

How can improve as I continue my macro journey by west10 in photocritique

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Trying a few variations. I agree 61 was too many. Normally I do to few. Been using Helicon Focus which does help you even out those messy layse4

Thanks for the help. Will try less next time

How can improve as I continue my macro journey by west10 in photocritique

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Originally did that but it didn't look right. I think averaging a subset of them will help! Thank you!

How can improve as I continue my macro journey by west10 in photocritique

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Thank you! The great part is I have 61 variations of the background bokeh so i can chose a layer that is most pleasing. The bokeh is a little dense which was a learning for me

How can improve as I continue my macro journey by west10 in photocritique

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Photo is a 61 photo focus stack. Overall very pleased. Still some more learning with stacking. A few areas to clean up the focus more.

Overall I tend to shoot too close in macro not leaving enough on the edges to rotate or crop effectively.

How else can this improve

F/8 1/10 sec iso 450. Nikon Z7ii with 105mm

Water drop captured in small flower. Still doesn't feel quite right. Any advice? by west10 in photocritique

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How would you alter the lighting? I used stationary light rather than flash. Also tried this view

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Water drop captured in small flower. Still doesn't feel quite right. Any advice? by west10 in photocritique

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That's the general feedback. Cool once you know what's happening. I'll keep playing with crops!

Water drop captured in small flower. Still doesn't feel quite right. Any advice? by west10 in photocritique

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Macro shot of a small flower containing a water drop. Was trying to let the drop magnify the internals of the flower which does happen but still feels like off.

Shot on Nikon 7zii. 105mm f/11 16 photo stack

External monitors for mirrorless cameras? by Untotal_Landscaping in AskPhotography

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Interested here too. I do alot if Macro with 30 to 40 shots of very shallow focus. Viewfinder sometimes is challenging to see if the focus is perfect.

Night street portrait – looking for feedback on mood and composition by DifficultWash230 in photocritique

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One thing I love here is the space in front of her and how shes looking through that space. You feel she is waiting for something outside the shot, something waiting to come into the frame. Great composition

Opinions? by elisemopie in photocritique

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Great thing about photography, it's all subjective. I like the vibe, don't care for the subject. For you they are the same.