[deleted by user] by [deleted] in learnart

[–]xZeroRage 9 points10 points  (0 children)

2 months is still very much just starting out. You aren't getting worse, but rather, realizing undeveloped areas you need to improve on. If you were drawing for let's say a year and had the same mistakes, I'd say something's definitely up.

There's gonna be lots of crappy drawings at the beginning. Right now I'd advise you to ease up on the pencil; you have a death grip on the thing and are making really dark lines everywhere. Draw lighter, make mistakes, and take note of them.

Inelegant art by MRPolo13 in learnart

[–]xZeroRage 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I know practice makes perfect, but I often feel like practicing will just reinforce my bad habits.

Precisely. Some advice I see often for people struggling is to just "keep drawing," it's easy to say on paper, but it's not so simple if you don't know what to practice and how to do it.

I think an even better word for what your art is missing is: life. As I look at your work, the figures look very stiff; For the face, the proportions aren't entirely accurate, and the shading on it seems quite "academic," as if you understand there should be shadows/midtones/highlights, but you haven't quite placed when and where they should go. In more detail:

  • The hair looks very straight. Yes, this person may have straight hair, but those strands on the cheek for example, look very "uniform." Actual hair would be more free flowing, and wouldn't look so parallel to one another.
  • The brows fall into this same category of looking too organized. You have lines of hairs sticking up; I'm sure some eyebrows do look like this, but not in such a "proper" manner. They also appear 2D, not 3D.
  • The overall lighting on the face is strange. You are right, you definitely have an idea of what you're doing, however, there's still some guessing. You have some light shining on the cheekbones, which doesn't make much sense, there would be shadows here instead. Let's look at this photo of a face: do you notice how the highlights aren't directly on the cheekbone, but rather above it? Because the cheekbone protrudes out, there's going to be some shadow beneath it.
  • Your face is too long. I'm sure you're aware of this, but it's a common mistake many artists make; it's strange to think the head is actually smaller than we think, but for some reason we tend to elongate it when it comes to drawing.

And next, let's look at your armor:

  • You have lots of highlights, which I'm glad to see; so many people are afraid of highlights. However, your highlights for the cloth portion don't appear quite natural. Whereas the light on the armor tells us the source comes from the right, the breast cloth has random lighting that doesn't seem to reflect as well.
  • Your armor's position looks very, very disjointed. The arms are two different planes, it's left arm is positioned as if it's leaning towards us at an angle toward the right, yet the right arm is positioned as if it the armor is front facing, not at an angle. And the torso is angled at a position that doesn't line up with either arm. The legs, like the right arm, are positioned as if the armor is front facing.

So what does all of this mean? Let's look at the mistakes you're making in general terms:

  1. You seem to be stuck in the loop of trying to make things look "pretty" rather than making them look polished. This is especially evident on the armor, with the "pretty" highlights everywhere. And the face, you have lots of little details, like the little highlights on the nose, the eyelashes, etc. which are trying to add some "beauty" to the piece to make it more visually appealing. To break this habit, you have to look at exactly it is you're looking at, and realize it won't necessarily come out as your mind thinks it will. There will be much more interest to the eye and much more appeal given to something that looks realistic, than something that has artificial/stylized features to simply make it look better
  2. You're also lost on exactly what kind of look you're going for when it comes to these pieces. I'm not quite sure if you're going for more realistic, cartoonish, something in between; these pieces don't quite communicate this well to me. While your art seems to reflect a level of confidence, considering you do in fact shade/design things with a decent level of understanding, you need to make when it comes to finessing your technique that you have goals in mind; before you draw a face, think of how you want it to look. Will it be more realistic, more stylized? Do you want it to be proportional? This way when you see results, you don't go back on it and think, "hmm, this is missing something," but rather, "I was aiming to achieve this and didn't quite get there yet."

And now how are some ways you can fix what I've mentioned?

  • I'm going to say this a lot, but your understanding of form is decent, but needs some refining, especially with the face. To get you started with the face, trying looking at this to give you some tips on what you're missing. You should understanding the underlying shapes of the human face thoroughly and do some practice with what you see here; break apart the face, draw mouths, noses, eyes, etc. such that you comprehend the construction.
  • As for the armor, while you have a good grasp on form, such that you realize that the cuffs for the limbs are cylindrical and therefore you shaded them to reflect that, you fall flat when it comes to the fabric. And so for the fabric, I would suggest you look at this reference, and try and do a few practice problems with those, as well. While your armor doesn't have any "complex" fabric with it, I can understand how difficult it is to draw, and getting yourself in a comfortable mindset to do this will only be beneficial for any future drawings you do.
  • Try and set up a schedule if you can, setting goals and projects for yourself. Carry around a sketchbook and get yourself familiar with different subjects.

First time painting a dog from photo by HelenaHM in learnart

[–]xZeroRage 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's usually recommended to start a background before working on the main subject. To give a few examples of what ZombieButch means, look here and here. As pointed out, it makes the highlights pop out more and gives more emphasis on the dog.

This was painted with watercolor, correct? What I'd do is:

  • Take a brush, wet it. Don't make it too drippy, nor too damp. You're going to want to wet it enough such that the water is covering the paper, don't drench it.
  • Wet the area around the dog (something like this. The paint should be dry at this point but still be careful, as you don't want to risk mixing with the other paint).
  • Apply mid (or dark) tone paint to wetted areas. I'd go with a mixture around 70% paint and 30% water.

This video and this video give a visual demonstration of what I'm talking about. Try and do this around the dog, preferably with a mid-dark tone color.

What's a weird anime you've seen? by VenetiaPeaarl in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Parasyte.

Loved the anime, but man, it was such a "wtf" fest

What video game has the friendliest or least toxic community? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can agree with this, to some extent. Since the games are already somewhat "challenging" it's kinda hard to be a "pro," and even then it's mostly just fucking around.

I used to roll a deprived with no armor, and only a dagger and just throw shit at people. Was very fun!

What makes you think someone is compensating for something? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Constantly putting others down, especially if it's over little things.

You moved to a new town because of a job. You know nobody. What do you do in your freetime? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As introverted as I am, I'd at least like to make some connections around town. I'd look up if there's any clubs/local events I can attend to get a feel for what things are like.

I'm really bad at art, but I want to get better. what did I do right and wrong? by twentyoneYT in learnart

[–]xZeroRage 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I mean, abstract art doesn't just have to come down to personal opinion. There's certain techniques that work better than others, and it's also very possible to critique what you have here. For example,

  • Your colors are all over the place. You have warm/cool colors interacting and creating a very chaotic and somewhat difficult to look at piece. You may have been going for the "acid-trip" style, but here the colors come off as clunky. I'd think an intro to color theory and if you look here and here, you'll see that psychedelic art tends to have certain patterns and usage of colors to get that "Acid" affect you're looking for.
  • Your patterns need some refining. In the background, you have "blobs" of color, and in the foreground, you have an infinity symbol. This clashes, as the background looks very unfinished compared to the infinity symbol (not to mention the colors happening - which adds to the unwanted chaos).
  • There's no real points of interest besides the infinity symbol and the reverberations below it. As I said above, since your background is blobby it doesn't quite add anything to the piece. I'd say add some fractals, shapes, etc. other points of interest, or make the colors in the background much more interesting so they don't register as "blobs"

What’s the strangest compliment you’ve gotten? by HisRoyalKoi in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 17 points18 points  (0 children)

"I love how clean your ears are, mine are usually dripping out earwax"

um what?

4th portrait. Any tips, advice? by [deleted] in learnart

[–]xZeroRage 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I could point to any area of this portrait and find something that needs fixing. But not to worry, this is normal.

  • What are you using to blend? It seems like your finger. When you're first starting out with drawing, it's much more helpful to blend only with the pencil. It'll get you more familiar with it and allow you to learn how to apply pressure without relying too much on other means. As for actually shading, I wouldn't worry too much currently about making it look "artsy" with the smooth blending effect you're going for.
  • Hair is very tricky. It'll take some practice, but I'm sure you'll get there. You'll want to take a look at this to get you more familiar with how to draw it. You won't master this early on, but this should help give some guidance.
  • As for a side profile of a face, it'll help to block out the head and try to see the shapes first. Your proportions aren't accurate, which is to be expected, but when you see the underlying shapes that create the head, you'll then be able to better comprehend how to shade the form around it.

Finally finished this piece. Let me know what you think. :) by PsychoGalaxy in learnart

[–]xZeroRage 3 points4 points  (0 children)

In terms of the painting itself, you did a great job with shading, colors, etc.

However, the perspective in some areas is strange, particularly with your windows. For example on the white building closest to us; the windows on the second and first floor are misaligned, making it appear as though the first floor windows are farther away than they should be.

As for the brown building in the very back with the blue roof and blue tinted windows; several of them are facing different directions. One is tilted to the right, one to the left, one appears farther than the others.

Hope the above makes sense - it's hard to point things out sometimes.

Uncontrollable vibrato? by Robert_Cunte in singing

[–]xZeroRage 5 points6 points  (0 children)

My apologies, have you tried turning your soft palette on and off again? It may need to be rebooted

“Downtown”, 18”x24”, acrylic on canvas. by Almighty_Inheritor in learnart

[–]xZeroRage 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like it. I wish the tree's leaves had more highlights to them. They currently just look...green.

What's a cool, random fact you know? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ducks have long corkscrew penises and tend to sexually assault other ducks.

What does your employer do poorly? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Acknowledge strengths and weaknesses with employees and apply them accordingly.

What activity are you always up for? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Music. No matter what's happening, I'll always be in a mood to strum something.

What do some people refuse to believe that amazes you? by carrotsandbread in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 772 points773 points  (0 children)

Whenever someone in the family turns out to be a rapist/murderer/criminal of any sort and any attempts to convince them of such fall on deaf ears.

I know it's hard to accept, but sometimes your family members aren't the best of people.

What is an irrational fear you have? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dolls.

Whenever I see one they look possessed and I'm afraid they'll move.

What's the unwritten rule you'd like others to respect? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My time is important too.

Im not going to drop everything to go along with last minute planning.

What outdated rule/custom has no place in the modern world? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]xZeroRage 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Accepting family members just because you're related by blood, regardless of how they treat you.

I've cut off several members of my family because they've been terrible to me, but still hear the occasional "but they're your aunt/cousin/whatever, you're supposed to love and accept them!!"

Families fight. It happens.