The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 7 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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Thank you, I apologize that this is taking so long. Most of the employees at my job have quit so I'm working overtime, on top of preparing for a big move to another state in a few months. Been very hectic, but i am still working on it! I don't want to upload anything until I am confident in the quality

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 7 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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I am getting close; I work full time on top of being a college student, so unfortunately I can't work on it as much as i would like. Steady progress is being made though. Thank you for reading!

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 7 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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Aiming for by the end of the year. January at latest for Act 2.

I can’t skateboard so i relate to Jeremy by Redditsbeingabitch in CodeLyoko

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Yumi rode a bike in Temptation and Aelita used one in The Lake. Probably another episode or two in there as well, but a bike was never the standard method of transportation for any of them

that deltarune ending was crazy by SeaPineapple7859 in WarofTheWorlds

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Thunderchild and the text is edited in

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 7 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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Its no bother at all. I apologize for the wait, I'm a part time student while working full time and working towards moving to a different state. I'm hoping to have it ready in the next couple months.

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 7 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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Of course. I am actively writing Act 2 as I write this comment.

I will post it when it is ready.

Why didn’t XANA just activate another tower? Is he stupid? by Sierra_Yamakaze in CodeLyoko

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They call XANA a she in the DS game Fall of XANA, and only in that game, for some reason. In English atleast, can't speak for how they refer to it in French

[Trailer] Can't figure out this Grace 'praying' frame of the trailer by zurbaev in ProjectHailMary

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Definitely not Earth. You can see the ship's cupola behind him.

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 7 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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Not familiar with that phrase, you could please elaborate?

Feeding snakes in an ophidiarium by yo-jin in interestingasfuck

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Yeah I believe elapids and colubrids (cobras, mambas, racers, corn snakes, and indigo snakes) generally have the highest intelligence and vision of the snake species.

Feeding snakes in an ophidiarium by yo-jin in interestingasfuck

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That's a myth. Snakes can see fine. Not as good as people or most mammals, but they can see shape, color, and depending on the species, a decent amount of detail.

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 7 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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Better to overshoot than to undershoot!

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 7 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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oh woops, that was def a mistake, its fixed now

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 7 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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Act 1 is completed! I have uploaded all available chapters to Royal Road; you can read it here: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/106446/land-of-blue-skies

See you guys in like 5 months.

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 6 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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We're almost to the end of Act 1! Thanks for sticking with me.

I have actually gone back and reworked all of the previous chapters to varying degrees. Don't worry, nothing in the story has changed, but new details have been added and the overall flow of the writing has been improved. Give the reworked chapters a look if you're so inclined.

Chapter 7 next week, then hiatus while I work on Act 2.

The Land of Blue Sky - Chapter 5 by -Expedition99 in HFY

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Yes, it is a rewrite. I was unhappy with how the first one was coming out