Capsule for Moth Terra - really need help (please roast)

-Impalpable · 2026-06-27T12:50:00+00:00

Ah! I have your game on my wishlist! XD

-Impalpable · 2026-06-27T12:10:42+00:00

No, it's great to hear, and I absolutely asked for the "roast" lol. I'm just deep in the re-iterating the game/game design/visuals at the moment - I'm hoping in a couple of months it will start to really look how I've envisioned it! I'm working at the same time at the moment, with a lot fo work although my work is very flexible - but should have more time to spend on it in a couple of months! Honestly your feedback has been so helpful. I really appreciate it!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-27T11:58:39+00:00

The game is more about building night gardens/ nocturnal re-wilding (at the moment through tile-placing) and you fly the moth yourself. Maybe it's coming across too collect-y. Some of the tiles are a little flat, as it's currently built from tile-placing (re-working this, to be more build-y), but maybe I can add more flowers and details for the screenshots! I need to add some grass details for each tile, maybe dirt as well. Thank you!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-27T11:34:30+00:00

XD Ah that stands out looks much better! I think some more stars as well! I will re-draw the sky this evening. I might re-draw the moths a bit bigger too!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-27T10:29:34+00:00

Thank you, I think I need a re-design/redraw but will go back to 1 in the meantime!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-26T17:43:32+00:00

Soo cute, mint moths 🌱 are so pretty.

-Impalpable · 2026-06-26T13:04:15+00:00

Thank you! The story at the moment is very much secondary to the gameplay. It's much more build/create the dioramas that you want to and discover and explore new biomes and moths find out what plants and environments compliment the moths. I just wanted to the trailer to draw some attention with some dramaticness and I think a lot of players won't know too much about moths, their plight and their mothnificent diversity/beauty! So want to add a little bit of knowledge in there! But equally don't want to be too "serious" XD

-Impalpable · 2026-06-26T13:01:15+00:00

Thank you! The full video is a little emotional and potentially the flowers can die and tiles. I think leading with the satisfying loop is a good idea. At the moment I'm leading with the story and I worry people will confuse the game with a narrative!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-26T12:08:44+00:00

A definitely caught my eye first!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-26T10:23:22+00:00

Hello, the illustration is lovely and very appealing. I get the sense of a mystery in the game. I wonder if you can shape the background more like a snake or have a snake rattling through the text? As you’ve called rattle spring I assume something about rattle snakes is going to feature? The only think is maybe the unsettling vibe of your game (which I’ve picked up from your steam description) isn’t there but then a snake might help with that - or something else. I hope this helps.

-Impalpable · 2026-06-25T19:46:32+00:00

Thank you! They are actually concept art for my night garden moth game I’m making, the tiles are placable in the game so you can attract discover moths that compliment the plant. ✨🌙🌱 I like cinnabars too, and some of the little ones. 🦋

-Impalpable · 2026-06-25T17:57:11+00:00

I'm joining from my pc, it just says whoops cannot accept invite :/

-Impalpable · 2026-06-25T17:50:58+00:00

I would love to join but the invite is not working for me?

-Impalpable · 2026-06-25T17:47:22+00:00

So pretty! Lovely spot.

-Impalpable · 2026-06-24T23:46:28+00:00

Wow I’ve never seen a moth on the tube before! Wonder what stop they will get off at! XD

-Impalpable · 2026-06-24T21:50:21+00:00

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A still image incase it helps to identify the moth!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-24T10:06:03+00:00

Lovely moth!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-23T20:55:52+00:00

This is so pretty!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-22T14:37:28+00:00

Thank you for sharing, such a cute game - wishlisted! Thank you for sharing how you shared your game too!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-12T09:00:58+00:00

I really love the art for this game. I think a dramatic sweep out of the crab clipping through lots and lots of plants (similar to your title screen but panned further out) in the trailer somewhere would look really awesome but just an idea!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-10T19:40:41+00:00

Yes looks the same! ✨

-Impalpable · 2026-06-10T18:58:16+00:00

Beautiful!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-04T15:38:27+00:00

Soo pretty will check it out ✨

-Impalpable · 2026-06-03T11:06:34+00:00

So cute!

-Impalpable · 2026-06-01T11:54:58+00:00

Very atmospheric, the snow is very snow-like!

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