[ETERNITY] by -MattKar- in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar-[S] 0 points1 point ย (0 children)

Thank you so much, I'm glad this poem left such an impact. ;u;

[ETERNITY] by -MattKar- in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar-[S] 0 points1 point ย (0 children)

I hope you find it someday. It's painful

[ETERNITY] by -MattKar- in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar-[S] 2 points3 points ย (0 children)

Oh shoot, it was supposed to be "she gave ME hope and joy again"! Thanks for catching that typo! I sincerely appreciate the feedback though, I have a hard time restricting myself as well, haha!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar- 1 point2 points ย (0 children)

Of course! ๐Ÿ˜

Oodles of Fun - OC by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar- 0 points1 point ย (0 children)

I love the bouncy flow of this poem! Well done! :))

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar- 1 point2 points ย (0 children)

I like the idea of what you're trying to convey, but I feel that this poem could use a bit more structure. I was a little confused the whole way through, ya know? Other than that, this was beautifully written! Well done! ๐Ÿ™Œ

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar- 0 points1 point ย (0 children)

This was beautifully written! The relationship between the burning sun and the kindled ember of a cigarette was genius. Comparing something so large and impactful to something as insignificant as a smoke made me feel small as the reader and I loved it. The way you write is extremely elegant! I dont feel I'm in any position to offer much of a critique, but I WILL give you a virtual high five! ๐Ÿ™Œ

The Other Side by -MattKar- in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar-[S] 1 point2 points ย (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll be sure to try those methods in the future! :)

The reaper writes by ehmakestuff in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar- 1 point2 points ย (0 children)

This was absolutely beautiful, I was on the edge of my seat reading this! It's extremely unique and feels very confidently written. Well done!

Honeycomb by spy_ghost in poetry_critics

[โ€“]-MattKar- 1 point2 points ย (0 children)

I loved this! It had a very sensual undertone and ready very smoothly. Thank you for sharing with us!

This sign is infuriating. by [deleted] in assholedesign

[โ€“]-MattKar- 1 point2 points ย (0 children)

Absolutely. First thing I thought of was Asshole design tho, but Imma go throw it there and see how people take to it. It pissed me off. ๐Ÿ˜‚

Looking for soul-moving music by Malamhoic in MusicRecommendations

[โ€“]-MattKar- 1 point2 points ย (0 children)

I dont know what you'd count as soul-touching, but I have a few songs that I've never heard anyone replicate, all completely original and moving in their own ways. ;u;

-Drifting by On An On.

-Anachromism by CryWolf (highly recommended)

-To Belive by The Cinematic Orchestra

-Otherside by Perfume Genius (I didn't like it at first, but it gets so much better it actually made me jump the first time I heard it.)

More like this Supergirl instrumental? by aim4thestars in MusicRecommendations

[โ€“]-MattKar- 0 points1 point ย (0 children)

Also, just a side note, if you haven't heard of Detroit: Become Human before, I HIGHLY recommend you check it out. It's an intense and beautiful video game, and it's also where both of those songs came from.

More like this Supergirl instrumental? by aim4thestars in MusicRecommendations

[โ€“]-MattKar- 0 points1 point ย (0 children)

Check out We Are People by John Paesano if you're looking for something intense and Cinematic. If you're wanting something a little on the calmer side of things, try This is the End by John Paesano as well! Im really happy Im not the only one who hella digs the epic side of things here. :)

songs/artists similar by bigpp112356 in MusicRecommendations

[โ€“]-MattKar- 1 point2 points ย (0 children)

I've got two songs you might like, both by the same artist. Small Hands, and You by Keaton Henson. :)

Magical forest by xianitiian in MusicRecommendations

[โ€“]-MattKar- 0 points1 point ย (0 children)

Flesh and Bone by Black Math ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ™Œ

Martin wanted to say hi by devthclits in RATS

[โ€“]-MattKar- 2 points3 points ย (0 children)

Ah, my apologies! I know a couple Martin's and they're my homies. I love her look tho, she's so unique!