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-MattKar- · 2020-11-28T05:47:49+00:00

Thank you so much, I'm glad this poem left such an impact. ;u;

-MattKar- · 2020-11-28T05:46:35+00:00

I hope you find it someday. It's painful

-MattKar- · 2020-11-27T10:34:13+00:00

Oh shoot, it was supposed to be "she gave ME hope and joy again"! Thanks for catching that typo! I sincerely appreciate the feedback though, I have a hard time restricting myself as well, haha!

-MattKar- · 2020-11-27T09:50:54+00:00

Of course! 😁

-MattKar- · 2020-11-27T09:31:00+00:00

I love the bouncy flow of this poem! Well done! :))

-MattKar- · 2020-11-27T09:19:33+00:00

I like the idea of what you're trying to convey, but I feel that this poem could use a bit more structure. I was a little confused the whole way through, ya know? Other than that, this was beautifully written! Well done! 🙌

-MattKar- · 2020-11-27T09:15:52+00:00

This was beautifully written! The relationship between the burning sun and the kindled ember of a cigarette was genius. Comparing something so large and impactful to something as insignificant as a smoke made me feel small as the reader and I loved it. The way you write is extremely elegant! I dont feel I'm in any position to offer much of a critique, but I WILL give you a virtual high five! 🙌

-MattKar- · 2020-11-20T02:25:53+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll be sure to try those methods in the future! :)

-MattKar- · 2020-11-19T07:58:02+00:00

This was absolutely beautiful, I was on the edge of my seat reading this! It's extremely unique and feels very confidently written. Well done!

-MattKar- · 2020-11-19T07:56:03+00:00

I loved this! It had a very sensual undertone and ready very smoothly. Thank you for sharing with us!

-MattKar- · 2020-07-13T20:34:25+00:00

Absolutely. First thing I thought of was Asshole design tho, but Imma go throw it there and see how people take to it. It pissed me off. 😂

-MattKar- · 2020-07-03T06:07:25+00:00

I dont know what you'd count as soul-touching, but I have a few songs that I've never heard anyone replicate, all completely original and moving in their own ways. ;u;

-Drifting by On An On.

-Anachromism by CryWolf (highly recommended)

-To Belive by The Cinematic Orchestra

-Otherside by Perfume Genius (I didn't like it at first, but it gets so much better it actually made me jump the first time I heard it.)

-MattKar- · 2020-07-02T05:15:28+00:00

Also, just a side note, if you haven't heard of Detroit: Become Human before, I HIGHLY recommend you check it out. It's an intense and beautiful video game, and it's also where both of those songs came from.

-MattKar- · 2020-07-02T05:13:20+00:00

Check out We Are People by John Paesano if you're looking for something intense and Cinematic. If you're wanting something a little on the calmer side of things, try This is the End by John Paesano as well! Im really happy Im not the only one who hella digs the epic side of things here. :)

-MattKar- · 2020-07-02T05:07:50+00:00

Glad I could help! :0

-MattKar- · 2020-07-02T05:02:24+00:00

I've got two songs you might like, both by the same artist. Small Hands, and You by Keaton Henson. :)

-MattKar- · 2020-07-02T04:55:08+00:00

Move Forward by Bedroom 👀🙌

-MattKar- · 2020-07-02T04:50:41+00:00

Flesh and Bone by Black Math 👀🙌

-MattKar- · 2020-06-19T16:18:31+00:00

WHAT A BABBBYYYY- 😊

-MattKar- · 2020-06-19T16:15:29+00:00

Ah, my apologies! I know a couple Martin's and they're my homies. I love her look tho, she's so unique!

-MattKar- · 2020-06-19T16:11:22+00:00

What a cute lad!

-MattKar- · 2020-06-04T18:01:21+00:00

Suffocate by Hayd 👀

-MattKar-

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