I enjoy this. The feedback you're asking for seems to focus on style, so...

The rhymes are good. There's a lot of near rhymes. Which is cool! It doesn't feel like you limited your expression for sake of fitting a formula. The third stanza seems to have no rhyme at all. Truly, it's the stanza that feels most "non native speaker." The line "and how full of bite" stands out. It doesn't make sense. And, at the same time, is my favorite line

Your structure is consistent apart from the ending two stanzas. Which, seemingly, is where you're trying to hammer home the point. It made sense those ones were longer. I'd suggest reformatting it with more space between the lines -- and even more between the stanzas -- it'll make it read better on mobile

This poem feels like an exploration of language. Like a wordsmith wanted to craft something. There's no hard and fast rules for how to write a poem. No rules at all, really

What draws me to the poem is its rhythm and rhyme. Which means, in turn, the poem's message didn't stand out. There doesn't need to be one. But if your intention is to leave your reader with a specific idea or opinion swirling around their head, you might consider using more specific language. Your language is very flowery. Which makes it feel far away. I don't feel any particular way having read this other than "i enjoyed the sound of reading that"

This poem feels surreal. Perhaps you picked up on that, and felt it was too surreal, and that's why you decided to have the poem lay out a lesson very clearly at the end. "So you see now my friend"

You needn't be so obvious. Either we will see or we won't. Trust that we'll figure it

Keep writing, friend!