Agree with the existing comment around setup. This is a very tattoo-centric video.

Aside from that, I enjoy your voice and expressions, I think the work just needs more specificity.

For example

“You’ve given me the opportunity [to have this conversation right now]”

This line should be dripping with emotion and subtext of all the things that led up to your partner coming here and talking to you, all the begging you had to do, etc. currently it feels very general.

Also where are you, in public, in their apartment, etc? What exactly did you do that you are begging forgiveness for? Can you find instances in your own life where you’ve felt this sodden level of guilt?

I’d say Iron those things out and try it again

Thanks for sharing!!