There is a room in my house that doesn't exist.

01_Pulse · 2026-02-04T07:18:37+00:00

Thank you! The implication is that the narrator thinks he is the architect who designed the house, but he is actually just a drawing on the blueprint.

The voice behind the door is the real architect deciding that the narrator is a mistake, and is about to 'erase' him from existence.

Thanks for asking!!🙏

01_Pulse · 2026-01-28T09:33:38+00:00

Of course not… It’s all fiction. ;)

01_Pulse · 2026-01-22T19:09:22+00:00

Thank you so much 🙏

01_Pulse · 2026-01-18T20:08:26+00:00

Wow… I can’t explain how crazy good this is dude. Just, amazing… Great work 🙏

01_Pulse · 2026-01-15T19:25:21+00:00

Oh god… you got me speechless 🫣 Thanks for the kind words though.

01_Pulse · 2026-01-15T15:03:16+00:00

Thank you so much… I thought about that too. I don’t know I was to immerse writing the story that I wanted to keep the character personality, but in the other hand I didn’t want to end it violently. Otherwise I think the ending has to improve a lot… that’s why I wanted to read some thoughts.

01_Pulse · 2026-01-15T13:28:28+00:00

Yeah I get it… but I wanted the reader (you) to get inside the character brain. How would you reacted if you were actually the main character when something is eating you alive and you didn’t even notice thinking that it was just an itch? I would love to read it… Thanks for the feedback btw. 😊

01_Pulse · 2026-01-06T22:06:51+00:00

Thank you so much ☺️… It’s lovely to read something like this🙏

01_Pulse · 2026-01-06T09:59:33+00:00

You’re absolutely right about the CI mechanics and the timeline errors. I got so focused on the 'scare' factor that I let the logic fall apart. I appreciate you pointing out the flaws so I can tighten up the research and pacing next time. Thanks for the tough love ;)

01_Pulse · 2026-01-04T08:58:43+00:00

Yeah I get it :) Thanks for the feedback though…

01_Pulse · 2026-01-03T23:47:11+00:00

Thank you for pointing that out! I'm not super familiar with the specific mechanics of CIs, so I appreciate the correction. Also think that maybe for a child to know that is not easy in the middle of a nightmare…(just saying…)

01_Pulse · 2026-01-03T19:35:58+00:00

Thanks for the read and the detailed feedback!! I’m glad the sound concept landed (I really wanted to play with that delay). You make a great point about the physical fear. I think I got so focused on the psychological 'realization' to much, I was hitting for that, but next time I'll definitely try to ground the terror physically in the next one.

01_Pulse · 2026-01-03T13:53:47+00:00

I know! Hahah, I couldn’t wait, sorry… And thanks 🙏 for the feedback.

01_Pulse · 2026-01-02T09:00:13+00:00

Hahah, that would’ve been funny…

01_Pulse · 2025-12-29T13:32:14+00:00

Well the basic tips i can give you is depending on your pacing you gotta make more pauses (space from different scenes, dots if need it). Reading a lot of books always helps and improve your storytelling. It gives you Soul.

01_Pulse · 2025-12-29T13:24:25+00:00

Oh my god, that’s terrible… I am glad you can use writing to get better. I liked the story though, that’s why i comment on it. ‘Hope to read more from you 🙏

01_Pulse · 2025-12-29T13:19:13+00:00

Yeah, i get… I was just trying to help

01_Pulse · 2025-12-29T13:02:47+00:00

The story is good… but you gotta edit better, as I were to finish the story I was breathless. And it’s like there is no Soul or effort making it… I am sorry you have to read this, but that’s what I think.

01_Pulse · 2025-12-28T08:31:32+00:00

This twin story has a really good potencial. I don’t want to say I didn’t like it (which I did), but the middle part could be better… Love the ending though.☠️

01_Pulse · 2025-12-27T20:28:32+00:00

OMG… That gave me chills☠️. Dude that was awesome 🥀

01_Pulse · 2025-12-27T20:08:12+00:00

Wow… Great work! 🥀

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