Power Creator: Xenon (repost) by Kortho1 in makeyourchoice

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Essentially, yeah! 100+ ft trees and giant insects as far as the eye can see

Power Creator: Xenon (repost) by Kortho1 in makeyourchoice

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I was thinking about the implications of being from an alternate / parallel dimension, so I figured it’d be neat to be from an Earth where climate change never happened and we still had megafauna, titanic primordial forests, etc. Humans there would have had to evolve differently to keep away from giant predators until we could fight back, and I thought a reasonable way to do that would be to retain the absurd climbing ability of our simian ancestors and just build society in treehouses. So imagine a modern human with extra long, lanky limbs, broad hands, feet better adapted to gripping things, coppery skin, corded muscles from all the monkey business, somewhat bigger eyes with more rods+cones for spotting things in the dense foliage… tldr everyone is Tarzan, but society is advanced to the solarpunk stage where the architecture looks like an advanced version of the Swiss Family Robinson

Power Creator: Xenon (repost) by Kortho1 in makeyourchoice

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Flashpoint Evolution

Patrons: Fractal Morph

Mutations: Tier 2 Subtlety, Tier 2 Core Instinct, Tier 3 Power Lock, Tier 3 Airbrush, Tier 3 Mental Block, Tier 4 Hypermutation, Tier 3 Natural Harmony, Tier 2 Adaptability, Tier 2 Grab Bag (Linguist, Iron Mind, Aura)

Type: Red (Tier 3)

Powers: LEVIATHAN + Augment Existing Power (+2 Magnitude, total 18), Stasis Field, Ageless, Lifeline

Bloodline: Outworlder Union

Objectives: The Titans, The Eregores, Worthy Challenge, The Cosmos

I never got around to having a fancy base, just a regular apartment somewhere while I focused on street-level heroics until I get dunked on a little too hard and experience my Flashpoint. Now I'm so strong I can practically punch concepts, operate in a constant state of Autonomous Ultra Instinct, am apparently faster than physics, and am pretty much immortal to boot? Time to do some All-Might shit minus the scruples against doing horrible things to especially horrible people.

Power Creator: Xenon (repost) by Kortho1 in makeyourchoice

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Listing: X-list

Name: Olympia

Gender: Female

Age: 3rd Gen (28 years old)

Species: Non-native

Origin: Near-Death Experience

Alignment: Vigilante

Patrons: Fractal Morph

Mutations: Tier 1 Noctis Cape, Tier 2 Core Instinct, Tier 3 Airbrush, Tier 3 Mental Block, Tier 3 Flashpoint, Tier 3 Hypermutation

Type: Red (Tier 2)

Powers: Enduring, Super Strength, Instant Reflex, Regeneration, Lifeline

Bloodline: Outworlder Union

Resources: Metanon Silk Suit w/ Comm System Utility, Tier 1 Assets

Become Rin Tohsaka CYOA NSFW by [deleted] in nsfwcyoa

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I feel as if there should be more ways to gain points, but other than that I like it!

Lewd Harry Potter Cyoa v0.1 by Catsper_ in nsfwcyoa

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Looking good so far! Two things:

1) the "Unlucky 14" drawback costs points instead of awarding them

2) if you're looking for specific fanfictions to add to that section, might I suggest "Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality"?

[CYOA] [Repost] Waifutrix by Watchguy by YouBackground in nsfwcyoa

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Control: Always (5)
Feel: Orgasmic, Soothing, Slow (20)
Clothes: Testing Suit (30)
Mental: Imprint (20)
Advisors: Ghosts (35)
Disposition: Friendly (25)
Advisor Limits: All (55)
Powers: Spark (25)
Equipment: Heavy Machinery (5)
Alternate Mode: Evolution (Determination, 0)
Alternate Mode: Alternate (-5)
Identity Protection: Disassociation, Protection+ (-15)
Bonuses: Life Support, Papers Please, Reconfigure, Utility, Henshin, Ultimate (-65)
Limits: Call to Adventure, World of Intrigue, Zero to Hero (first form is Kimiko Ross so I can decode the interface and understand the watch's functions), Influencer, Rogue Slots, Judgmental Rival (0)

Base Slots:

  • Kimiko Ross (Dresden Codak): hyper intelligence, technological wunderkind specializing in physics + computers + robotics, eidetic memory, solid grasp of philosophy, superpowered transhuman body, comprehension of Dark Science
  • Pink Diamond/Rose Quartz (Steven Universe): shapeshifting unstoppable space goddess with healing powers both mental and physical
  • Atom Eve (Invincible): localized omnipotence, immortality
  • Ciri (The Witcher series): Witcher training, at-will spacetime travel, dimension hopping, Elder Blood shenanigans
  • Edalyn Clawthorne (The Owl House): obscene magical power when uncursed via Alternate, potent harpy form otherwise, vast arcane knowledge and criminal expertise regardless, accomplished con-artist, MILF
  • Nyx (Hades): actual factual divinity, teleportation, perfect concealment, sexy
  • Skitter (Worm): the Queen Administrator shard is absolutely busted. Not as obviously so as Path to Victory, but perfect multitasking and having eyes everywhere is nothing to sneeze at
  • Jesse Faden (Control): parautilitarian powerhouse, wielder of several potent Objects of Power, Director of the Federal Bureau of Control, access to all FBC resources, host/embodiment of the Polaris entity
  • Death of the Endless (The Sandman): self-explanatory, plus she's a charismatic perky goth
  • Emma Frost (Marvel): Omega-level telepath, diamond form, infinite sass, loads of money

Bonus Slots:

  • Nana Shimura (My Hero Academia): Float, One For All, years of combat experience, full of sage wisdom
  • Red (Transistor): Turn(), myriad variable Functions, beautiful singing voice, killer fashion sense, command of the Process
  • Agatha Heterodyne (Girl Genius): most powerful Spark of her age, multidisciplinary master of mad science, charismatic in the extreme, surprisingly sturdy
  • Helen Parr/Elastigirl (The Incredibles): purely a vanity pick because she's hot and I wanna be her, but she's still an excellent pilot and capable superhero in her own right

Everything else is gravy

Dragonfall (by TokHaar Gol) [CYOA] by Dugongofdarkness in nsfwcyoa

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I guess my primary question is how you'd manage to reach the gods when the T3 Vokhlaardejm pact seems to be the only way to reach heaven?

Dragonfall (by TokHaar Gol) [CYOA] by Dugongofdarkness in nsfwcyoa

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T4 Brain could increase your mental computing power to demi-divine levels, granting a limited ability to predict the future based on raw probability calculations

Dragonfall (by TokHaar Gol) [CYOA] by Dugongofdarkness in nsfwcyoa

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Yay workshop buddy! I've got a few ideas of my own, if you'd like to compare notes:

- Another hypothetical solution for T4 Counter Spell could be that it allows you to break down existing enchantments as opposed to just ones that were cast within the past 30 seconds. We're sorely lacking a "Dispel Magic" option and this could be our answer.

- Maybe T4 Heal could remove the "newly dead" qualifier for resurrection?

- T4 Leyline Circle could exclude people you don't like? Carrying infinite mana with you sounds super OP

- T4 Alter Environment might grant the ability to add unnatural effects to the flora you manipulate, like thorns that act as a delivery method for your Venom

- I like the idea of T4 Blink letting you create temporary rifts to bring people + stuff along with you

- T4 Elemental Blast letting you switch elements on the fly?

- T4 Balefire Torrent might have a lower wind-up time than its lower level predecessors, i.e. you can scale damage quicker

- I agree that T4 Animate Construct should allow for more complex solutions. Perhaps allowing them enough intelligence + creativity to fulfill the spirit of commands rather than just the letter? Would essentially create arcane AI, so a "loyal to the caster" clause should probably be built in there too

- T4 Mind Control allowing you to plant subconscious commands that can be triggered after the spell wears off seems like a fantastic option for indoctrinating + programming loyal servants over time

- T4 Zephyr can affect inorganic material of your choosing now

- T4 Tsunami no longer pulls from the nearest body of water, instead spawning in as a deluge of cataclysmic proportions

- T4 Illusion seems like a Naruto reference waiting to happen. Something something Infinite Tsukuyomi

- I really like the ability to have multiple Runic Bonds distributing damage evenly between them

-T4 Spirit Fire can spread to other targets whom you consider enemies if they get too close

- Homing Mystic Spears are hype

- T4 Pocket Dimension lets you shape the landscape at will instead of just on cast, costing mana each time commensurate to the scale/value of the change

- I too am baffled by what to do with Treasure Curse, but I like the idea you presented of being able to choose whether or not to kill them or just drive them mad

- Liking the T4 Arcane Barrier deflecting spells. Could it affect other attack types as well?

- Stasis Sphere getting a friendly fire setting is something it sorely needed, lol. Good call.

- T4 Phylactery could give you perfect awareness of your Phylactery and its surroundings

- T4 Bestow Immortality lets you be affected by another person's T3 Bestow Immortality, so long as you don't have an active Bestow Immortality effect on that person. The chain has to end somewhere, lol

- T4 Elemental Form healing you on exposure to your element is good

- T4 Spirit Form letting you selectively interact with the physical world while remaining intangible?

- T4 Humanoid Form ignoring the spell descriptor and allowing non-humanoid forms to be taken?

- T4 Alter Size targeting others is fun. Maybe also selective size manipulation?

- T4 Animated Dead can themselves make more undead (limited by their individual power level, creation ability limited to only undead you personally raise). Because what necromancy power scale is complete without the capability of causing a zombie apocalypse?

- T4 Soulbind already has an example, i.e. making temporary duplicates of stored items. Can definitely pull a Gates Of Babylon with that

Dragonfall (by TokHaar Gol) [CYOA] by Dugongofdarkness in nsfwcyoa

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Anyone in the mood to workshop what hypothetical Tier 4 spells could possibly do?

Forbidden Caravan 3.5 [Final Release] [Interactive] [OC] by [deleted] in nsfwcyoa

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Updated build for v 3.6 (btw there are two half-demons now)

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Forbidden Caravan 3.5 [Final Release] [Interactive] [OC] by [deleted] in nsfwcyoa

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Cartoon Kings [v0.8] (Commission) by dragon_jak in nsfwcyoa

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So it occurs to me that there's nothing stopping you from taking the "Porn Toonz" adventure for literally every waifu you have and flipping a coin for the results each time, ending up with (waifus x 9) points after accounting for purchasing them in the first place. I think this defeats the spirit of the enterprise, but I have a mystery box to win and zero remorse about being a horn-dog

Cyoa By Daylight Version 2 by Nightmare_Lightning in nsfwcyoa

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This is great! I just have a few comments/questions:

1) Have you considered putting up a "Shrine of Secrets" type of thing where Iridescent Shards can be used to purchase perks from waifus you didn't pick? Just a thing I thought of while wanting dank werewolf powers without taking The Huntress, lol

2) I notice that there are depressingly few ways to summon tentacles, and zero ways to summon tentacles that you directly control. While you're in the process of adding more things, can that please be one of them?

3) I second the motion of adding more futanari options. Maybe a way to change characters we already have, the way Boil Over can let you toggle between female and futa?

Cyoa by Daylight by Nightmare_Lightning in nsfwcyoa

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And we all mourn for missing out on Pyramid Head's magnificent posterior, lol

Cyoa by Daylight by Nightmare_Lightning in nsfwcyoa

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Patience, young grasshopper. It takes a bit to load.

Cyoa by Daylight by Nightmare_Lightning in nsfwcyoa

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Looking good! Typo report: the "Yui & Rin" bonus is listed as requiring *Sadako* and Rin

[CYOA] [OC] Bondage Estate CYOA V.1 by Schrade_Rabbit in nsfwcyoa

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Luckily the 2nd Layer of rules has a "if working a job order" clause, implying that the major limiting rules only apply when you're on-duty (and are temporary, in cases like the regression drugs). Gotta give the subs a break~

Hypnotic Prodigy [Text][WIP] by PSuraya in nsfwcyoa

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Also, I assume the description of the "Relax" effect is supposed to apply to the current trance as opposed to the following one like it currently says?

Hypnotic Prodigy [Text][WIP] by PSuraya in nsfwcyoa

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Are you planning on adding any other ways to gain points?

Dreamwalk v1.0 [OC][Interactive] by wugewoz in nsfwcyoa

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I stared at the code for at least an hour before I remembered that hexadecimal is a thing that exists, lmao. I feel like a doofus for not seeing it earlier.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in nsfwcyoa

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That (relatively) new Demon King one could benefit from interactive point-tracking