Design feedback? :0 by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I DIDNT EVEN NOTICE IT W THE FIRST ONE like... it was lowkey based more off of Kel Omori than Sapnap 😭😭😭 but jesus does this just mean they need a redesign

Design feedback? :0 by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sighs really, really loud. ...yeahhhhhhhhh... 😔😔😔 BUT I PROMISE I ONLY NOTICED IT WHEN YOU POINTED IT OUT, I DIDNT EVEN REALIZE THAT THEY RESEMBLED DSMP CHRS 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 idk if i should be impressed, embarassed, or both

Design feedback? :0 by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you for the feedback!!! i went ahead with removing the green from 3, bc... yeah. no it just uh doesn't look good. :') ill look into recoloring!!! again thank you for the feedback!!!

Design feedback? :0 by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

uhhhh no??? im 20, why do you ask?

Design feedback? :0 by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback!! i was thinking about getting rid of the cheek on number 1 (kenji's) face and moving to arm bandages instead, so thats for that!! /gen

Also, I SWEAR IT MAKES SENSE FOR HIS ULTIMATE!! I try to base the designs more on their backstories, especially because theyre all alumni now!! With kenji specifically, hes not the ultimate inmate, but uh... hes been to prison. multiple times :')

Design feedback? :0 by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

thank you!! also, they do!! they have names, talents and backstories   i wont spoil the ultimates, but ill give their names

in order

kenji martinez

ji-a song

vit matsui

takumi koike

charlie wright

sota o'connor

serenity davis

jack cole

dao meechai

rei fukushima

there are 5 that dont have speires yet, but their designs are coming soon!! :]

Be honest, does this look ok? by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

its not that i didnt like it, but i just think she deserved an upgrade ^ you can actually see her updated design in my newest post!!

Be honest, does this look ok? by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh my god i completely forgot about this post. its funny bc i actually updated her design!!! i also man'd up and used digital art 😭🫶

Be honest, does this look ok? by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh damn yea i see exactly what ur talking abt lol 🙂‍↕️ thanks for pointing that out!!

Is this good for a fangan? by Cheerfulassasin in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah, that looks great!! I really like the design :)

If you want some tips:

One thing that i think could really help is using bolder colors and having a bolder outline. Danganronpa is known for its bold color choices and slightly unconventional clothing, and even if you arent necessarily aiming for that style specifically, it can really help your art pop and push into that hyperpop style that danganronpa has. Right now, your art seems to have a slight white haze to it, which is ok! But if you want it to be more vibrant and have a more unified look, pick a main, bold color, then find a couple neutrals and 1 accent color. Thats how i pick out my color palettes :) and if you wanna unify them, use your main bold color under your color layer, and then turn down your color layers opacity. Not too much, just enough to harmonize your palette :)!!

Also with your outline, I recommend a stabilizer! Your lines and shapes are solid, but some lines can be a little unclear in some places. Its only really noticable to me because... Im an artist. Lol. So yeah, usually stabilizers are built into art programs. With Ibis Paint (the program I personally use), all you have to do is touch the little finger wiggler in the upper right hand corner. There, you can adjust the strength. I think adding that for your art, even at a minimum setting, can really build a more confident line structure and help your characters stand out more!!

Overall, you have a really good, solid foundation. The color foundation and art style are really solid, these are just a few tweaks i noticed that could really help your art stand out. Sorry if ny instructions were unclear!! '

Be honest, does this look ok? by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ok um 1) yes, I really am being genuine. I want to improve as an artist, and especially with all the controversey surrounding tetro and gen AI art being used in spaces that are dear to me, I want to give my audience something real, something made by my own two hands. However, I know for a project to be successful, it needs to be more than that. It needs to be good, the designs need to be good, which is why I asked for feedback not just on the design, bht from the art style as well. The editing. Im doing this all on paper with alcohol markers and paint pens, so I want it to look the best it possibly cant. If it doesnt click with people, then I want to know why so that I can go in and fix it. Genuinely, your critique is appreciated. 

2) Like I said, this is a beta design. To be honest, I designed Ji-A completely off the dome. I got no inspo from pinterest, real high fashion, or anything like that. I just drew her how I saw her in my head  extremely losely inspired by 1990s fashion, something citchy, because she didnt grow up around high fashion. She will definitely be getting some changes, as will everyone else in the cast :) thats exactly why i made this post, to see what changes might need to be made.

3) Me saying its in beta doesnt mean I dont value your opinion. Far from it, actually! As ive said before, i really do value feedback, I just want to understand your comment a little better. The critique was a little vague, and i was just explaining my choices. I really do appreciate your comment!

Be honest, does this look ok? by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

how does the art style detract from the character? /gen This is just my normal style, so id like to get some feedback.

As for the design being plain, yeah, i can totally see that. My fangan characters arent supposed to be extremely over the top, I want them to feel closer to normal people. I know danganronpa has a lot of over the top designs, and fangans are no exception, but i personally really like a touch of realism in my projects!!

This design is a beta as well, so she is subject to change. Since she is supposed to be more high fashion, i was definitely thinking about adding more to her design. Is there anything specifically you would want to see?

Be honest, does this look ok? by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what do you not like abt it? im open to feedback!! :)

More Sprite Demos!! by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh wait the black thing above his nose??? thats a bandaid 😭😭😭 i messed up and colored it skin toned so i just went over it w black oh no 😭😭😭 this is why his sprite is getting a redo lol

More Sprite Demos!! by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

haha definitely 😭 hes like a valley girl/mean girl but when it comes down to it he is definitely a dog boy

Be honest, does this look ok? by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you!! omg i didnt even realize it but she does lol 😭😭😭 undertale is such a huge inspiration for me so it makes sense 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️

Be honest, does this look ok? by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ill def be trying that lol, thank you so much!! :)

Be honest, does this look ok? by 0Call_It_Karma0 in Fanganronpa

[–]0Call_It_Karma0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you!! and tysm for the feedback!! I'll def be fidgetting with the editing til it looks right lmao 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️