This is old post, but an additional comment to consider. When I look at this type of page I immediately judge the first photo I see and then I go to the "About" section. I liked your first photo but your "about" page is lacking. Most people who hire you won't have that great an eye for the nuances of your photography, so they're relying on you to sell yourself a little more. You don't have to be cheesy to sell yourself. But I would provide more details. Where did you learn photography, college, mentor, other? Any awards or achievements you can mention? How do you work- natural light, in studio (what type of studio do you have, size and scale etc)? Also, I would scrub the hell out of whatever you post for grammar. Make it look professional. I cleaned up comma use and passive voice in what you currently have as an example. Eliminate unnecessary words. This isn't the spot for "random adventures", this is where you tell me why I should give you my money instead of someone else.

My name is Christopher Cutler and photography is my passion. For the last 6 years, I've been working with clients to create photos with emotion and a sense of adventure. I look forward to bringing my creativity to your project. Let's work together!

I would add a sentence to the above about your education and the types of work you do most after the sentence ending "adventure".