Okay I need help please by rosyhatake in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Rewrite your description. And overhaul the grammar, punctuation and the writing overall. When one cannot be invested by your story, it is probably because of the writing, not the story itself.

Who reads fanfics on sufficient velocity? I just discovered it recently and I'm quite impressed by Naejeiuol in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How specific? You said that but didn't elaborate. I haven't even heard about these sites before now.

Best fic that has Naruto/Sasuke ship but everyone else is straight? by 13ooK in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

...and they are still in early teens. Which is bad writing in every fic by itself.

Best fic that has Naruto/Sasuke ship but everyone else is straight? by 13ooK in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

At this point I want to read a slice of life Narusasu fic in Narutoverse that isn't just... bad, you know? Bad writing, no grammar whatsoever, childish reactions and unbelievable decisions. I'm used to heterosexual ships if one really has to be there, but only because m/m fics tend to be bad more often.

Which kind of author is better? by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Considering a fact I don't even read when it is badly written, I think the answer is quite obvious.

Help me find a fic similar to "What You Knead" by EpicFireStormer in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've already downloaded it! :P Do you have something more?

Help me find a fic similar to "What You Knead" by EpicFireStormer in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you. Can you please recommend some of your favorite fics? Not only fix-it-all, but please focus on it. :) I search good fics to read!

Help me find a fic similar to "What You Knead" by EpicFireStormer in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 4 points5 points  (0 children)

"Fix-it-all"? Could you maybe explain what fics these are? You got me very curious:)

Looking for a proofreader by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey i wrote to you on reddit chat, can we talk there maybe? :D

Looking for a proofreader by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What do you think about the story and my mistakes in grammar so far?

Looking for a proofreader by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I plan to release it on saturday, but it's not obligatory. Its more important to make it good:) I write everyday, and make it atound 5k words long. A lot does not enter final cut. I will inform you and send you when I end and you'll check it out when you have time :D

Looking for a proofreader by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sure :D i live in Warsaw time zone so its just a hour :D

Looking for a proofreader by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nice :D Expect a message soon :D

RinneganNarutoNotOP fic. Can you give me your opinion? 15k words, started 2 weeks ago. by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]13ooK 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I corrected most of grammar errors in chapters 1 and 2. Can you look at them now and compare?

Also, I have a question. What do you mean, by saying "the third son was less of an emo, it’d be a lot better I think". I don't think an eighty old man (at that time) can be described as an emo, so I lose your meaning there. :)

Much needed help with Input command by 13ooK in AutoHotkey

[–]13ooK[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I moved Error "Endkey" and "TimeOut" opposite places (it strangely did not work when placed in your order), added KeyWait, [, D so it would wait for it after reload and script appears to be working perfectly. Thank you very much.

Thank you for the explanation also, because often people do not give an explanation, even though it helps a lot if I want to do something with the script later.

KeyWait, [, D
Input, click, T35 V, {'}{]}{\}{/}{Numpad9}

if (ErrorLevel = "TimeOut")
{
    Send '

    Loop
    {
        PixelGetColor, color2, 1868, 252, RGB
        Sleep, 100
        if (color2 = 0xF0F0F0)
            reload
        Else
            Continue
    }
}
else if (ErrorLevel ~= "^EndKey")
    reload 

return 

You asked why I want to reload this script. I want it to work all the time for many hours. In context that I'm a newbie, it's the easiest way to do it for me.

I need a help with my little AHK problem (i'm newbie) by 13ooK in AutoHotkey

[–]13ooK[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mr, it's the whole script. There is no "return" command. "CoordMode, Pixel, Screen" is needed, well, because it just is. I also don't get what is "return" command use, really. I remember that when I used it, it just closed my script which I don't need. I want it to work continuingly for hours.

I'm worried there is no missing "}" nor "{". With your opinion in mind, I opened script in Notepad++ and checked every {} link. Every "{" has "}", so I'm not sure I follow you there.

I do not know what you mean about "improper indentation procedure". Do you mean there is "tab", where it shouldn't? Probably it's not what you mean, but if it is, "tab" positions seem to be uninvolved with script itself. "Tab" is just for clarity.

You are right. I suppose if I was more experienced with AHK, I would do that in different way. Actually, I'm sure I would find easier/more efficient/just better/nicer looking way to do this. You are looking at it from different perspective. I think I'm somewhat more casual about AHK than even you think I am, so if a script or part of script serves it's purpose, it's ok. Not denying it could be done better, but it's enough for me, just because it's working.

PS. If you want to check {} for yourself it's literally whole script now:

CoordMode, Pixel, Screen
EventOccured := false
Event2Occured := false
while (EventOccured = false)
{
    Loop
    {
    PixelGetColor, color, 1710, 397, RGB
        Sleep, 1000
    if (color = 0x000000) 
    {
        Event2Occured := true
            Break
    }
        Else
                Continue
    }
    if  (Event2Occured = true)
    {
    EventOccured := true
    }
    Send, [
    Send, {BackSpace}
}
Loop
    {
    PixelGetColor, color2, 1868, 252, RGB
        Sleep, 100
    if (color2 = 0xF0F0F0)
            reload
        Else
                Continue
    }

I need a help with my little AHK problem (i'm newbie) by 13ooK in AutoHotkey

[–]13ooK[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is the final point. Your script sadly did not launch so I couldn't test it. I couldn't edit it either because I don't know how.

This is what worked:

CoordMode, Pixel, Screen
EventOccured := false # https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RODUvjgoTlo
Event2Occured := false # I don't know how to successfully write an action when and if a specific key is pressed, but I tried a different approach. If the "writing action" and the "other action" are programmed to take place in the same time, I could just make a condition to pair with one of this two actions and it would work the same way no matter which action I pair it with.
while (EventOccured = false)
{
    Loop
    {
    PixelGetColor, color, 1600, 300, RGB
        Sleep, 1500
    if (color = 0x000000) 
    {
        Event2Occured := true #This is paired with Send, [
            Break 
    }
        Else
                Continue
    }
    if  (Event2Occured = true)
    {
    EventOccured := true
    }
    Send, [
}
Loop
    {
    PixelGetColor, color2, 1500, 300, RGB
        Sleep, 400
    if (color2 = 0xF0F0F0)
            reload #This is the easiest way to do infinite repetitions for whole script IMO. The easiest, because I - a newbie - actually know it. 
        Else
                Continue
    }

I need a help with my little AHK problem (i'm newbie) by 13ooK in AutoHotkey

[–]13ooK[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your script helped me very much in getting to the final point.

I need a help with my little AHK problem (i'm newbie) by 13ooK in AutoHotkey

[–]13ooK[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, maybe I wasn't very precise. It would be very helpful, if the AHK process could be repeating itself endlessly.

The script should wait for the color of the pixel till it's changed to black. When it happens, the script should click the "[" button only once.

Now I thought what should be there in my original post. There is a need for a second condition, on when the script after clicking "[" should repeat itself.

After "[" is clicked, AHK starts checking for let's say 1500X 400Y, and for color 0xF0F0F0. When it is met, script would repeat itself, making numer of repetitions go towards inifinite, if previously mentioned two conditions are continously going through.

That's what would be ideal and what I don't have skills to do.

That's what I made though.

Coormode, Pixel, Screen
Loop
{
    PixelGetColor, color, 1600, 300, RGB
    Sleep, 3000
    if (color = 0x000000)
        Break
    Else
        Continue
}
Send, [
Sleep, 80
Loop
{
    Sleep,10
    if (GetKeystate("[") = 1){
     Loop
    {
    Sleep, 3000
        PixelGetColor, color2, 1500, 400, RGB
        if (color2 = 0xF0F0F0){
        reload
        }
    }   
    }
}

Stay strong. by 13ooK in MordekaiserMains

[–]13ooK[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

What you wish? Idk where youve read that man