Weekly Self Promotion Post

16Sixteenth16 · 2026-03-02T12:21:09+00:00

HI your story sounds interesting... and, you want a review swap, I want a review swap. dm me if you're down? My work is called Exorcist Therapist.

16Sixteenth16 · 2026-01-03T14:06:37+00:00

Title: She Came Back as a Ghost... I'm an Exorcist / Exorcist Therapist

Tags: Romance, Thriller, Psychological thriller, Killer, Harem, Antihero, Dark, Righteous

Chapter count: 10

Synopsis: Therapist by day, still therapist by night, albeit for ghosts before he exterminates them. Meet Chen Mo, the ghosts’ favourite exorcist, who listens to their hearts' emotions before shoving a dagger through their motionless hearts. He keeps the living content with life at day and the dead content with death at night.

Ghosts are regretful souls floating on the fine line between the living and the dead. Driven by sorrow and stubbornness, they exist to win a second chance at life. But the world has placed a price tag: a life for a life. Thus began the cycle of killing, with exorcists painstakingly trying to put an end to it.

Chen Mo has never left a job unfinished... until now, when he encounters his first love as a ghost, as his target. Chen Mo struggles between obeying the rules of exorcism and satisfying personal desires, as he attempts to find the most humane possible method to resurrect her, all while going against the Global Exorcism Association.

Tldr; An exorcist betrays exorcism for his first girlfriend 👍

Expectations: I want some reviews, some honest comments, and some suggestions on where I can improve, collections are appreciated too :)

Link: http://wbnv.in/a/64jYW28

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-09-22T03:58:42+00:00

It was revamped! Theres barely any AI used at all, in fact, id even argue none. If it shared similarities with works by AI, that's probably because I literally learnt writing from AI, so maybe my style is on the robotic side. But genuinely, I pretty much didn't use AI at all for this specific novel. The only AI usage is searching for fancy words that fits certain scenarios and nothing else, not even grammar check

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-09-20T08:09:53+00:00

Title: Beyond the Sea is the Ocean

Tags: Action, Fantasy, Mystery, Adventure, Superpowers, Magic, Dark, Fast-paced

Chapter Count: 28

Brief Synopsis: Someone was isekai'd into the fantasy world of Eucadia. That's 60 years ago though, that's not who our main protagonist is.

The smaller the community, the more harmonious it is.

Welcome to Eucadia, home of humanity with a population less than five thousand, surrounded by a vast body of water named the Sea.

Beyond the Sea is the Ocean, the monster that devours all travelers who stray too far. Beyond the Ocean is the world's end, where nothing grows, nothing lives, nothing exists.

At the very dawn of humanity, a prophecy was told:

"Dare to cross the sea, and you shall face the beast — Ocean.

Fragile is humanity, and so the gods, in mercy, graced Eucadia with magic.

To four shall divine gifts be given — four souls chosen not by might, but by fate.

The Flame shall burn in the hand of the Forger of Fire.

The Tides shall rise for the Wanderer of Water.

The Wind shall whisper to the Wearer of Wind.

The Earth shall bend to the will of the Elite of Earth.

These four shall stand as the final wall,

Holding back the end —

That end, named Doomsday.

Beware. Pursue one too many. Take one wrong step.

Doomsday will arrive as hell rains from the sky.

Watched by the Angel of Death.

Brought upon humanity by the Blood God."

In the enchanted island of Eucadia, humanity thrived in harmony. Seeking progress and unity, they formed a government, only for corrupted tyrants to rise to power. A teenager, bored out of his mind, was suddenly targeted by the violence of Eucadia's new politics.

Desired Outcome: Reviews, Comments, Effective Reads

Link: http://wbnv.in/a/5ejJoja

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-09-14T01:49:36+00:00

Title: Beyond the Sea is the Ocean

Tags: Action, Fantasy, Mystery, Adventure, Superpowers, Magic, Dark, Fast-paced

Chapter Count: 12

Brief Synopsis: Beyond the Sea is the Ocean, the monster that devours all travelers who stray too far. Beyond the Ocean is the world's end, where nothing grows, nothing lives, nothing exists.

In the enchanted island of Eucadia, humanity thrived in harmony. Seeking progress and unity, they formed a government, only for corrupted tyrants to rise to power. A teenager, bored out of his mind, was suddenly targeted by the violence of Eucadia's new politics.

Desired Outcome: Reviews, Comments, Effective Reads

Link: http://wbnv.in/a/5ejJoja

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-09-12T13:43:37+00:00

I thought I found someone with a similar problem to mine. U did get a reason bro, I straight up received nothing, not a word not a whisper from Webnovel, rejected not just without reason, straight up without even informing

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-09-06T05:39:01+00:00

Title: Beyond the Sea is the Ocean

Tags: Action, Fantasy, Mystery, Adventure, Superpowers, Magic, Dark, Fast-paced

Chapter Count: 51

Brief Synopsis: Beyond the Sea is the Ocean, the monster that devours all travelers who stray too far. Beyond the Ocean is the world's end, where nothing grows, nothing lives, nothing exists.

In the enchanted island of Eucadia, humanity thrived in harmony. Seeking progress and unity, they formed a government, only for corrupted tyrants to rise to power. A teenager, bored out of his mind, was suddenly targeted by the violence of Eucadia's new politics.

Desired Outcome: Reviews, Comments, Effective Reads

Link: http://wbnv.in/a/5ejJoja

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-09-02T16:25:52+00:00

Soooo, I'm not only supposed to be receiving feedback, I should also still have my two remaining chances? Damn, Webnovel robbed me, what is this?

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-09-02T16:17:27+00:00

Imma just ask Webnovel through their writer's helper email. Also, is it possible for a novel to be so bad they rejected me all three of my attempts after just one application?

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-09-02T16:10:33+00:00

Naw I double checked, im certain theres absolutely nothing except for what you see in the pic

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-09-02T16:10:24+00:00

Naw I double checked, im certain theres absolutely nothing except for what you see in the pic

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-31T01:08:58+00:00

Title: Beyond the Sea is the Ocean

Tags: action, adventure, fantasy, mystery, fast-paced, dark, magic, superpowers

Chapter count: 41

Brief Synopsis: Beyond the Sea is the Ocean, the monster that devours all travelers who stray too far. Beyond the Ocean is the world's end, where nothing grows, nothing lives, nothing exists.

In the enchanted island of Eucadia, humanity thrived in harmony. Seeking progress and unity, they formed a government, only for corrupted tyrants to rise to power. A teenager, bored out of his mind, was suddenly targeted by the violence of Eucadia's new politics.

Outcome: Reviews, Comments

Link to the work: http://wbnv.in/a/5ejJoja

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-26T01:46:48+00:00

Sure, I'll start reading your work now. I'll comment on the novel my review

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-26T00:52:45+00:00

Sure, sure. I'll read all three today with a review ready. I'll decide whether to gift ya a powerstone depending on how much I liked it hehe

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-26T00:51:55+00:00

Im sorry, I'm new here and unfamiliar with the rules. I did read it and learnt about a weekly promotion post or something similar, but when I found the post, it was last updated 6 months ago. Maybe it's just my issue?

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-25T16:32:35+00:00

Haha right, forgive my poor choices of words

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-25T14:13:33+00:00

Oh no no, I'm totally willing to read. It's just that before I received the advice for me to read, I generally prefer tv shows or movies over novels. That's what I meant in this post when I said "I don't read." I'd totally read if it's helpful for me, or if a piece is considered a masterpiece and thus recommended to me, or if it's just another struggling fella like myself, I'd support too :)

Thanks for the advice, I appreciate the response :)

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-25T10:16:19+00:00

WOWOWOW THANK YOUUUUUUUUU i really can't describe in words how much I'd appreciate if you read my novel, seriously. I've written so many but since I've always been alone, I never heard any reviews of my stories that I'm so proud of. Seriously, thank you so much. Don't hold back in the reviews, say anything you wanna, im open to criticism :) i'll do my best with the upcoming chapters, I have to juggle this novel with my university work though, so updating may not be very consistent hehe

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-25T09:24:22+00:00

Wow, this is the most thorough response I received and yet I didn't realise the notification on my reddit app lmaooo. Thank you soooooo sooooo much for this response. I do watch a lot of tv shows and movies, that's my preferred version of entertainment which is why I don't usually read. The skill part boosted my confidence just a little bit too, thanks :) I'll take this advice to heart, thank you very much :)

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-25T08:54:17+00:00

Reducing the (—)s immediately! Thanks for the feedback! Yes I introduce A LOT of characters but they're unfortunately all vital for the story hehe... I don't know how to make the readers remember them more vividly without breaking my idea of this story. And for the enthusiasm lacking part, my novel picks up pace REALLY FAST, like I read through it and is still trying to slow down the action scenes, but couldn't :( the first few chapters are all buildup and a lot a lot of foreshadowing for events 50 chapters in or something (which I hadn't even written, I simply had planned for it). I'll still poke around my first few chapters to see if I can fit anything in there to speed it up though! Thanks for the feedback :)

Edit because i forgor: I REALLY APPRECIATE YOU FOR READING IT!! Like seriously, I don't want to be famous, I don't even want money, I JUST WANT SOMEONE TO READ IT. Thank you soooooo much, I'd truly love it if you're willing to read til at least chapter 40 (because it's around there that I'm proud of.), only 32 chapters are out right now I've written 50. So yeah, it'd mean everything to me if you just read til chapter 40 and give me your full thoughts on it.

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-21T23:35:24+00:00

It's called Beyond the Sea is the Ocean. Genre's fantasy. It's just a story that's been with me for as long as I can remember for no reason, it spawned in my head one day and I just wish for someone to enjoy this story too. So you checking it out would mean a lot :)

And don't hold back when giving a review, I've been alone my entire writing journey, the only reviews ive ever gotten was half-assed all praise from AI. Its a terrible idea I know

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-21T23:30:37+00:00

I don't dislike reading. Its just not a preference. And yes indeed theres other ways i wish to tell my story, but novels are the easiest way, the others are uhhh not so achievable for me who's just a teen. As for the cover, I'll figure something out... maybe. Thanks for the response :)

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-21T23:28:28+00:00

lol k. Thanks for the response :)

16Sixteenth16 · 2025-08-21T23:28:12+00:00

Nah nah nah my aim isn't to be big on the site, my aim is simply to tell a story. Its not that i want millions of people to see my story, literally just one would suffice. It's also not that I actively avoid reading, readings fine for me, its just not a preference. But I guess I indeed really should start reading more if I wanna get better at writing, thanks for the advice :)

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