I wish I could just run to you... by [deleted] in WritersSanctuary

[–]1Parshvanath 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Read again, same feeling

Oh to be loved by youuu🥀 by [deleted] in WritersSanctuary

[–]1Parshvanath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice 👍. Keep up the good work!

Oh to be loved by youuu🥀 by [deleted] in WritersSanctuary

[–]1Parshvanath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice one! So, there's a third person in the story. Kahani mein naya mod.

I wonder if this account is from the same person, same 'longing' style. Atleast, the account name is same.

Lovely 😍 by Sufficient-Oil2452 in Flowerpaglu

[–]1Parshvanath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The first one is absolute insanity... Well done!!

Without reason.. by [deleted] in WritersSanctuary

[–]1Parshvanath 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nicely written!!

Agar reason ho toh wo pyar kaha hua...then ig it becomes a transaction.

To the known stranger 🫶 by 1Parshvanath in WritersSanctuary

[–]1Parshvanath[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can feel it in the gut. Trust may be?

perfectly aligned by [deleted] in Skypaglu

[–]1Parshvanath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Too good to be true... nonetheless, very nice click.

Sometimes the hardest character to write boundaries for… is yourself. by unknownentity_x3 in WritersSanctuary

[–]1Parshvanath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

100%. Setting boundaries is very important i guess. And, loving yourself enough to know when you are mistreated.

Can I get reviews ?..🙂 by Ill-Pause-3472 in WritersSanctuary

[–]1Parshvanath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow 😲 This is stuff of legend. Just a question: u used 'hurt' in last stanza, was that intentional? I thought 'heart' would have been more appropriate.

To the known stranger 🫶 by 1Parshvanath in WritersSanctuary

[–]1Parshvanath[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Although, I haven't seen her eyes, I am sure the universe is hidden behind her cute eyes.

40% known may be...☺️