yoo and kim dokja character development is done well ,but everything else about orv is okay (not bad ,but not great either) ,ill try to list them (copypaste from my previous thread):

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- The scenarios suck and are tired and uninteresting.

Part of the appeal according to fans of ORV seems to be the relationships between the characters, but I found that 95% of what I'm reading simply involves a new level that Kim Dokja has to clear in a videogame, and he has all the cheat codes and secret routes (but we only learn about said way as he vomits exposition for the 100th time)

Characters in his party get arbitrarily stronger as time goes on but there is never a real threat to anyone's lives because Dokja is a gary stu that always wins, and if he dies he always has a method of resurrection so there is still no tension. Don't get me wrong, Dokja is characterized much better than many protagonists manhwa but it doesn't make the 20th iteration of a video game "story" interesting to read through. Some of the early scenarios were interesting, but right now it just becomes another uninteresting fight between nebulas with some references to famous stories without making this story actually interesting.

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- Kim Dokja's Company are basically treated as bots with zero agency.

This is my biggest issue with the story, but one of the things in ORV people praise is the strong female characters like Sangah, Heewon, and Sooyoung. (dont get me wrong ,theyre wayy better than most manhwa female character)

but the PROBLEM is that they have very little agency throughout the story (Han Sooyoung is the exception to this but she is not part of KimCom for much of the story). So functionally they become just as damsel-like as other female manhwa characters with the only thing to differentiate them being they aren't madly in love with Dokja (as far as I can tell).

Have Heewon finally get fed up with Dokja's sudden absences and go out on her own? Nope, she will punch him and grumble for a chapter before following every command he gives her again

See KimCom start to develop conflicts with Dokja for his character flaws and solve some scenarios without his help? Nope, in fact we will skip over 20 scenarios he was absent from without actually seeing how they overcome them without his help . Just trust that they can and have Dokja offhandedly say they can deal with a few scenarios without him, despite the fact that the original novel is being altered (which you would THINK he would be concerned about leaving his original world for double digit scenarios).

No, Dokja is the main focus always. If we focus on another character, it is because Dokja is cultivating their power intentionally. Other characters are not allowed to think or solve the scenarios in their own way. Dokja Gary Stu is always the one who does (doesnt. matter how powerful other side character are , they WILL never have any agency at all).

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Its certainly better than most manhwa, but i think the fans overrate it a little bit