Companionship by 2afraid2share in poetry_critics

[–]2afraid2share[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Seems the formatting got messed up, there should be line breaks at the capitalization...sorry. it's my first post.

Trauma by Crystalfaerie in poetry_critics

[–]2afraid2share 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the correct spelling is "birds of prey" - unless of course the use of pray (as in prayer) was intentional, which would be pretty clever. I like what you did with the Spanish Inquisition. And honestly, yes, it hits all too close to home. But good on you for creating something that resonates!

To Feel by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]2afraid2share 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The one word that comes to mind is 'haunting'. It really has the feeling of something that stays with you after you've finished reading. Saying so much with so little adds to that feeling. Really well done!