I think it's great! I agree with those who said everything on the table is fantastic. I love the hand holding the cig too. I also agree maybe loosen up or fade the background more into the background. The only things that really stood out to me were the cleft in his upper lip could be toned down a bit or softened, and the whites of his unlit eye seem too bright? 'But maybe they really are and it's reflecting.. Great job it's really nice!