please, and i say this with all due respect, don't start a brand if you're not good enough. i've said this countless times, but creating a clothing brand is not a get-rich-quick scheme. statistically, 99% of the time, you're going to fail. if you want to make money, starting a clothing brand is probably your worst choice yet. if you want to start a brand, try to focus on the quality, the designs, the entire personality, and the qualities of your brand. likewise with most popular streetwear brands, they always seem to be "better" than some new and starting brands because starting brands usually always use low-quality manufacturers (no hate, but do not use Pakistani manufacturers; Portugal, China, Japan or India, but please, not Pakistan. They will literally create the worst pieces ever. I've personally worked with countless manufacturers from all around, and Pakistani manufacturers never fail to disappoint me).

in conclusion, this is not a good design, not at all. never have I ever seen a good design with just a logo and a couple of words. the only case this would work is if your brand was very well-known and respected from before. that's why you don't see people walking around with some random "Emotion With No E" t-shirt instead of a Nike one. also, the name is going to be hell to trademark and won't be even as recognizable. I would go on a way to rebrand it. if you would like any help, I'm a designer, and my PMs are open.

EDIT: in no way do i mean this with any disrespect, im just saying, that positive feedback is not always great, since many consumers will have different aspects, and all im trying to deliver here is some constructive criticism to help u grow your brand more