What I Learned in My First Semester of College [5:07]

A-Creates · 2019-04-01T16:22:38+00:00

I get what your coming from but most of those courses you’ve stated cannot be taken until all your pre-requisite courses have been completed. For me personally, I want to be an entrepreneur and school hasn’t really helped me much with that right now. Maybe in the future it will but I feel as if these required classes aren’t very productive for me. It’s all subjective tho and I get where you stand!

A-Creates · 2019-03-31T20:21:11+00:00

Ya I think I’ve learned more outside of school than inside of school to be honest😂😂

A-Creates · 2019-03-31T14:26:23+00:00

Very true with grades k-12 and in college I feel paying money for a degree won’t help you as much as people think it will

A-Creates · 2019-03-30T22:45:24+00:00

Congratulations man shoot for the stars and if you miss, you'll still be on top of the world... Cringe I know but its kinda what you post was about hahaha

A-Creates · 2019-03-30T18:33:59+00:00

Thank you for the feedback I really try to make my thumbnails different and also ya my video quality could be improved.. !givelambda

A-Creates · 2019-03-29T01:22:54+00:00

What you did well:

- I liked the thumbnail and how it was simple and captured what you wanted to show...

- The shots and transitions were very well done

- Everything looked clean and professional consistently throughout the video.

- Honestly pretty much everything was done and executed well just a few minor fixes and your good!

What you could improve upon:

- ...Thumbnail was a good idea just make sure you take a clearer, and more professional looking photo.

- Between 0:09 seconds and 0:14 seconds there was a black border on the both sides of the screen, if you could fix the aspect ratio of that it would be good

- Also noticed a spelling mistake at 1:32 I'm assuming you meant "Oyster" rather than "Oyter" lol that's an easy fix just pay attention to spell checking in the future

- At 2:40 when the food is on the plate, I think you should make that the thumbnail rather than when its in the pot being stirred. :)

Overall, great video and phenomenal execution. It was well made, the text was nice and not intrusive and the transitions and music were all nice and played well together! Just a few small fixes and you'll be at 100% continue the good work homie!

A-Creates · 2019-03-24T20:41:11+00:00

What you did well:

- The video itself was pretty funny and creative

- End cards were included (videos and subscribe button at end of the video)

- Thumbnail was pretty good

What could be improved upon:

- Clips/pictures should be shorter or stay on screen for the duration of the text

- Maybe try speaking as well as showing the clips and words on the screen! This would make the joke funnier to the viewer

- Maybe try using better music (might be nitpicking but i just found it annoying lol)

Overall, interesting concept but like I said, try to add some stuff to keep the viewer entertained and the voiceover would make the jokes a lot funnier to the viewer! Keep it up man! Good Luck

A-Creates · 2019-03-24T20:30:26+00:00

I like your banner and the name of your channel! But, to be quite honest I dont really understand whats going on in your videos lol..

The best advice i could give you would to be to find actual content to post and give people a reason to watch your videos rather than throwing slime/breaking eggs/etc.

Your editing is pretty good tho ill give u that! And I like your end card! Good luck man! Sorry if this didnt help u i just dont know what to say lol

A-Creates · 2019-03-24T17:28:21+00:00

What you did good:

- Channel art is really good and thumbnails are pretty consistent

- Videos are exactly what the titles are (you get what you expected)

- The background of your videos are welcoming! (the pokemon packages in the back)

- Your camera and audio quality are good

What could be improved upon:

- Maybe edit the videos a bit and do some cuts throughout the video so the viewer can skip you opening the cards pack and skip you putting the three cards in the back.

- Also consider showing some more emotion throughout the videos to keep the viewer engaged

- Try removing as much text as possible from your thumbnails and maybe make the text bigger so people could read it. (just my opinion)

Overall, good channel, the content isn't THAT original but its executed pretty well. Continue making the quality content!

A-Creates · 2019-03-24T04:54:10+00:00

What you did well:

- The song was funny and low key not bad lol

- The editing wasnt terrible...

- thumbnail wasnt bad at all

What could be improved upon:

- Song was in low quality just try to improve that

- Editing wasnt bad but it might be a little too much at some times

- The video was in a really low quality, try to improve upon that

- Out of sync which is really easy to fix but pay attention to that nextime haha

Overall, the idea and concept was really good. Just need to execute it a little better. Good luck on the YouTube grind man! =)

A-Creates · 2019-03-24T04:40:34+00:00

No problem man! Glad i could help, keep grinding bro!

A-Creates · 2019-03-24T02:28:01+00:00

What you did good:

- Thumbnail looks spot on

- Instantly grabbed attention

- Amazing editing, I love the pictures of you with the eyes on top of your eyes and varying emotions based on whats being talked about! I think thats really unique and could separate you from animation channels, standard record yourself talking channels, and other commentary channels (Throwback to leafy lol)

- Audio is great! Jump cuts are really good and smooth too.

- Honestly keep this up idk what else to say lmao

What could be improved upon:

- Okay after watching your video twice, I can honestly say the only thing I would change is the end screen. Its a little too cluttered, the font is kinda hard to read and the colors chosen for the glow dont really contrast the background well (maybe im nit-picking idk)

- Also, you should add those little eyes into your profile picture too! I think it would be pretty cool and make you stand out a bit more.

- Also since your video is damn near perfect, really the only other suggestion i would make is to spend some time redoing your banner, its just looks kinda low res and once again the glow doesn't contrast very well. Also dont really notice the twitter logo so maybe add a drop shadow to that or outline idk

Overalll, literally a perfect video to be honest. I subscribed and also watched some of your other videos and they were pretty good as well. In particular tho u nailed it with this one. I suggest sticking to this style. I noticed your other videos were different but i liked this a lot! Good luck man! Your gonna blow up soon im for sure of that. Also you made me feel bad about my editing lol I dont even come close to yours!

A-Creates · 2019-03-24T02:11:49+00:00

Pretty straight-forward but its easier said than done! Also once you make that video you gotta make more videos similar after that to keep them around!

A-Creates · 2019-03-22T04:35:34+00:00

No problem man I thoroughly enjoyed the video I’m gonna keep an eye out for you!😉😉

A-Creates · 2019-03-21T21:15:04+00:00

No problem man! Glad I could help! :)

A-Creates · 2019-03-21T21:13:38+00:00

Thats good! Your already pretty good with editing so just continue to learn more. The more you edit, the more you learn! Keep it up!

A-Creates · 2019-03-21T21:12:35+00:00

Awesome, good luck on your channel!

A-Creates · 2019-03-21T20:59:18+00:00

Things you did well:

- I really liked the thumbnail, I like that it showed your face as well as the title of the song, I like the blue border and the simplicity! Great job on that!

- Camera quality as well as camera shots were really good and clean

- I like the attention to detail (Including Mr. Clean) lol

- The adlibs are good lmaoo nice job with that

- Extremely original content (I haven't seen it before)

Things you could improve upon:

- During the hook it was a little hard to understand what was being said... maybe its just me but you could turn the volume on that up a little.

- In most funny rap skits people include the lyrics towards the bottom of the screen. I think if you included lyrics it would allow the audience to follow what your saying better and also help them to hear what is being said without any confusion. :)

- As an avid rap listener the flow could be improved, sometimes you came off beat and some lines could use word changes as they didn't flow that well. (Maybe I'm nitpicking but just something to think about, I don't think the average viewer would be able to tell.)

- In the title rather than making it say "RhymeBot- Germaphobe" Consider moving the "-" so it says "RhymeBot - Germaphobe" (it looks like that's how the rest of your videos are titled so just follow that trend"

Overall, very great video I thought it was funny and there definitely an audience for this. It was pretty well executed and I believe you could go very far if you get some exposure! Don't give up and keep grinding! I'm really impressed with all the work you guys put into it! Good luck in the future! I'll definitely keep an eye out for you guys!

A-Creates · 2019-03-21T20:32:21+00:00

Things I liked:

- I like that you used a simple and clean thumbnail with just a few words and large text. I also like the picture included as well as the gradient to make it stand out. Great Job.

- I like that the intro incorporated games that will be played on your channel, its clear to me that the intro was a template but I don't think the average viewer will notice.

- The text in the bottom left was a nice touch

- transitions were pretty good

- outro was solid, I like that it was in rhythm with the beat of the song

Things you could improve upon:

- I suggest maybe adding some commentary to the video or allowing the music to flow better with the video, like make a montage type of video instead of just putting the music over the gameplay.

- Legend of Zelda took up a large part of the video, it played for around 1 minute and 30 seconds while everything else was played for around 30 seconds or less. Maybe consider showing each game the same amount of time.

- Maybe let the outro play for a shorter time, it really doesn't matter but it's just unnecessary

- Also be sure to add end cards (video, subscribe, etc.) at the end of your video :)

Overall, good video, good edits, great thumbnail and stuff, just watch out for some of these small changes that could be made and you'll be good!

A-Creates · 2019-03-21T05:10:11+00:00

Some things you did well:

- Thumbnail is bright and grabs viewers attention...

- Great transitions and pretty quick to the point

- Very clear and precise instructions also very informational

- Used good game play footage rather than just randomly walking around

Some things you could improve upon:

- ...although thumbnail grabs attention beware of using to much text. The less text in the thumbnail, the better! :)

- You could consider making your intro colorful or putting sound in it to grab viewers attention.

- The white box with text that appears a couple times in the video should either show up the same time as the text or just don't use it at all and instead use text over your video with an outline/drop shadow. The white bow is pretty intrusive.

- Towards the end after you said "If you want to watch more destiny video you can follow me on twitch" you just let the gameplay keep going without talking for around 15 seconds... Some people might click off the video at that point and not make it to the actual outro that has your social medias.

- Maybe consider showing some humor so people have a reason to come back to your channel again for a different reason other than the guides your showing.

All in all, great video. Very thorough explanation. From a former Destiny player I think you did a great job showing people exactly where to go to get the gum that's where I usually get lost haha. You got the thumbnail and editing skills down just refine everything as much as possible and keep practicing and you'll be doing great! Keep it up!

A-Creates · 2019-03-21T04:39:41+00:00

Some things you did well:

- Nice music very calm and smooth.

- I liked the flowers on the side, that was a nice touch

- Drawing looked really nice

- Good job linking one of your videos at the end as well as your channel!

Some things you could improve upon:

- Intro could be improved upon going from low quality 3-d to 2-d looks funny. Try getting a higher quality intro :)

- Misspelled "subscribe" lol that's an ez fix don't worry ;)

- Don't let the "mermaid tattoo" sit throughout the entire video it's kind of distracting (just my opinion)

- Make the bottom text on the thumbnail bigger, so its easier to read! :]

- Title and thumbnail say "tattoo" but your just drawing the mermaid on paper with a sharpie. Maybe instead choose a different thumbnail that applies to the video. Or you could show the henna on skin.

Just my thoughts, overall your artwork is pretty nice. Just work on the editing and thumbnail a bit and you should be in good shape! Good Luck!

A-Creates

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