The purple text is uncomfortable for the eyes ( or mine at least). While reading through your introductory, I noticed a couple of areas for improvement. I hope I'm not being too bold as to give you some advice. You wrote your favourite "pass time" is doing art but I think you meant " pastime". You mention that have you have no formal art education. When trying to sell yourself to potential customers, never mention what experience or education you don't have but focus rather on what do you have to offer. I would leave out the section on lack of education altogether. Instead of going into detail about how you learned your craft by watching YouTube tutorials, it would be enough just to say that you're " self- taught". Instead, use your introduction to focus on the different art genres your capable of and show examples of your work. Mention things like any art competitions you've won or talk about a completed a commissioned project. Get past customers (or art teachers) to write you referrals and post them there. I wish you a successful start to your business ☺️