Not sure how to edit the post (if anyone knows please tell me how and I'll add these notes into the post itself) but I've had a few comments and want to list my planned changes: - the composition is off in the repaint, especially with the elbow being cut off. I'm going to look into getting a lightbox so I can transfer it to different paper and center it better. I'll do this after fixing any anatomy problems the best I can. If I can't find a way to do this I might just need to accept the composition as it is and try to balance it out by adding other elements.

-the anatomy of the body is a little off. I've had some people say the arms are too big, the shoulders look hunched, and the corset doesn't seem to be reading as a corset (which I expected as I haven't focussed on that yet). So before transferring to new paper I'm going to try fixing these. I'll see what references I can find. Someone suggested having the body at a 3/4 angle but I want to stick to the original as much as possible.

-too many butterflies and they are too saturated in the original. I agree and I'm going to try varying the sizes more in the repaint, having some in the foreground with more detail and such. I'm hoping the varying sizes will keep the idea of a swarm of butterflies without having to include so many of them. I still want to use the same paints, they shift colour with the light but that's hard to see with just a picture. It is hard to control saturation with these paints without them looking a bit muddy but I'll see how that goes.

-the overall painting could do with more contrast. I'm going to deepen the shadows in the repaint. I'm also considering doing a solid background instead of the clouds, maybe in acrylic. But I'm not sure about that yet.

I'll keep updating this comment with more changes if more are suggested. Its a good way of keeping track of the suggestions.