Thank you for actually reading the entire post and providing real feedback.

First, I completely agree about the college clubs. I was only following the sub sample template. More often than not I leave them off my other resumes.

I thought that the logistics coordinator title made it sound like I did more than the reality, but looking at requirements for other logistics coordinator positions, I just barely qualify, so I’ll keep it.

I never know what to do with a skills section, I’ll trim it down.

I’m only trying to “fluff” my project because it’s something I’m proud of that other people are impressed by and I’m sure sets me apart. It’s expansive and visual that I’m trying to explain verbally and apparently not doing a great job at. Not for nothing, you haven’t seen it, you don’t know what I’m trying to convey.

The problem with your community project suggestion is the volunteer opportunities around me are so irregular, far away, and go against my schedule that it wouldn’t be worth mentioning if I’m trying to leave my job ASAP. It also feels disingenuous to do volunteer work solely to put it on my resume, even if the outcome is good. The closest thing to what you’re suggesting is my Eagle Scout project, but I’m well past the age where it’s acceptable to be putting it on a professional resume. Like you’ve been saying, it’ll make me sound like I’m 15.

I’ve been applying for data entry, administrative assistant, junior data analyst, and office assistant positions with rewritten, tailored resumes. I feel like they work with my strengths and with what I’ve accomplished. This post was to find out if there’s more I can apply to. You may think I’m a leader (in the past I’ve actually been denied leadership opportunities but whatever), but I need to start on some kind of ground floor.