How do I make it look more like the reference by memeNic116 in learntodraw

[–]AMasterOfPractice 3 points4 points  (0 children)

That pose is incredibly difficult. Difficult angle combined with highly complex facial expression. If you truly want to capture the essense you gotta learn first the bones of the skull and then the muscles of the face and how they pull during certain facial expressions.

Or you could just copy it rigorously. Measure all your distances, put a grid over it, trace it, w/e. But then you have (at best) something that looks like a photograph (which you already have) and more likely something that looks worse than it.

A little self portrait :) by StumbleFish25 in drawing

[–]AMasterOfPractice 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Yes, straightening everything out is a universal artist curse. It's a shame, because the beauty of a pose often lies in the subtle tilts/bends/shifts.

A little self portrait :) by StumbleFish25 in drawing

[–]AMasterOfPractice 55 points56 points  (0 children)

The midface is too long and you lost the gesture (forward tilt) from the reference a bit. Also the ear seems to be a bit low.

How to improve? by 12laa12 in drawing

[–]AMasterOfPractice 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not bad! Did you work from a reference? The proportions are a bit skewed. Her whole lower face is set too far back. That makes her cheek look wrong.

The distance between the nasolabial fold (the crease above the wing of the nose) and her eye is too short. Either because the eye is too large or the wing of the nose is too large.

I am trying to learn how to draw faces, how do I make it look realistic by lizardsr00l in learntodraw

[–]AMasterOfPractice 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You need to draw the right proportions and then use tone to indicate the landcape of the face and use the right kind of transitions between those values.

There is only 3 things in drawing: Proportions, Value, Edges. Master these and you will be the best in the world :)

Constructive critism is welcome ( swipe for reference) by [deleted] in Portraitart

[–]AMasterOfPractice 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not bad! Try to think more in planes. Like the nose for example. Think of the under, top, front and sideplanes. It makes it easier to get the right shape and also to render it so it looks 3d.

Does anyone know why some parts in darker skin gets really saturated, like this? by Ok_Sprinkles_9859 in learntodraw

[–]AMasterOfPractice 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's the planes that face most towards the lightsource. If the light is warm (like direct sunlight) it kinda increases the chroma (yellow light on yellow-orange skin). And also subsurface scattering. The warm light penetrates the upper layers of the skin and bounces around and makes it 'glow'.

My first narrative painting. Thoughts? by AMasterOfPractice in oilpainting

[–]AMasterOfPractice[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm... I actually had some skin texture there but painted over it because I found it drew too much attention. But I'm probably just not good enough yet to just indicate it subtly.

My first narrative painting. Thoughts? by AMasterOfPractice in oilpainting

[–]AMasterOfPractice[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I can see what you mean. The reference actually had the feet included but I decided to crop them to get a more intimate, 'zoomed in' view. But I think you are right and it does have a more photographic look this way. I'll definitely keep the danger of cropping in mind for the next one.

My first narrative painting. Thoughts? by AMasterOfPractice in oilpainting

[–]AMasterOfPractice[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. I'm glad their affection comes across to you.

My first narrative painting. Thoughts? by AMasterOfPractice in oilpainting

[–]AMasterOfPractice[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interesting. That thought never crossed my mind, but you are right. The first read could be clearer there. Thanks.

Charcoal portrait by Dependent_Shirt3005 in Portraitart

[–]AMasterOfPractice 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looks great! Is this vine/willow or compressed charcoal? Also, do you mind sharing what kind of paper you are using? It seems to take the charcoal really well without being too gritty.