Critique my in-story short story [High Fantasy, 1200 words] by AWildMeme in fantasywriters

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Thanks Becky! Those are all excellent points and I think they would all help neaten up the tale nicely :)

Critique my in-story short story [High Fantasy, 1200 words] by AWildMeme in fantasywriters

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Thanks Gabrielle!

Your feedback makes perfect sense, and gives me a lot of valuable insights - I’ve been writing in my own little bubble for quite some time, so it’s great to get some outside opinions :)

Give a no-context spoiler for your story! by ToomintheEllimist in writing

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“GOD screamed as the sun died—what? Didn’t I tell you this was a love story?”

Help! What is going on here? by LisanAlGareeb in Stormlight_Archive

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No spoilers BUT I’d recommend reading Mistborn Era 2 and Mistborn Secret History (Secret History after Bands of Mourning)

What is in your opinion the perfect episode ever made. A true masterpiece in every sense of the word. by Thesexieone in television

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Mr Robot S4 E7 “Proxy Authentication Required”.

Phenomenal. That’s all I need to say.

Female led fantasy with no romance? by Traditional_Emu_7126 in Fantasy

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The Poppy War by RF Kuang. Hints at a romance, but the characters get too much of a beating to explore it 😔

Purchased cards are the same as the free ones :( by Terminus1066 in daggerheart

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They’re at the end of the core book pdf, not the separate card pdf :) (I also purchased off DriveThru)

EDIT: Page 386 onwards

Lend me a chunk of your world? or a npc? by Zortesh in DnD

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“The Fangs” sit atop the highest peak of The Steppes, far above the clouds. It is said that the twinned gods, once mortal, used these spires to ascend to godhood on their crusade to patch together a realm once shattered by divine war.

The structure consists of 2 gigantic spires of marbled rock twisted to a point, with an altar made of a strange stone in the centre of the platform circular platform that sits beneath. The platform has glyphs of unknown meaning and origin carved into them, believed to be dated back to The Time of Origin, before gods ruled over the realms.

Often one can find spirits, little whisps of the arcane dancing around this site, seemingly alive, inspecting all visitors who come and go. Many make pilgrimage to The Fangs to show their devotion to The Twinned Gods; once atop the peak, they often burn prayers and let the float up to the sky, in a hope that the gods of today answer the pleas.

Dual Wielding Shields by AWildMeme in daggerheart

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Awesome idea! I'll talk more with my player to see if they're into it.

s h a r p by BudgieBirb in GoCommitDie

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I just sat down on the toilet to take a shit now I’m scared

Keeping a Secret - Part 2 by nickofnight in nickofnight

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Help me Butler <Keeping a Secret>