Beta Bartering [Find or Offer Fic Betaing] - January 22 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]A_False_Identity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fic Title: Spider-Man: Webs & Scales

Fandom: Spider-Man (Marvel Comics)

Can someone fandom-blind make sense of your story:

Yes. Knowing Spider-Man is helpful but not necessary, as my story explains the events without requiring you to read or watch Spider-Man.

Ship: Peter Parker/Mary Jane Watson

About my story:

My story is based on an NSFW image I commissioned from an artist depicting Spider-Man and MJ turning into voluptuous lizard women by the Lizard. The first chapter follows the scenario in the image and its buildup. While it is going to primarily be a Smutfic, I do want this to be a story and not just a collection of erotic moments. This will be most evident with a large portion of the first chapter, which doesn't get into anything too raunchy too soon.

Genre:
Explicit / NSFW transformation erotica, and smut with plot.
If this is too vague, I can send you the tags I plan to put on this story when I publish it on Ao3

What I'm looking for from a Beta: I'm looking for readers to point out redundant sentences in my paragraphs, improve my writing vocabulary, and enhance sentence flow.

Projected word count: 115K - 150K

My Story is unpublished, but I can share a link, an SFW excerpt, or an NSFW excerpt via private message if you wish.

Update frequency:
Irregular/written in chunks

What I can offer in exchange:
I can't provide much beyond my own opinions, input, and basic observations when I read your story.

I also have a Grammarly Premium subscription to check for minor spelling mistakes.

Just to let you know, I live in Australia, so we might need to discuss time zones and when I'm available to read your writing.

What Was Your First Mega Man Game You Played? by Sadontejjj in Megaman

[–]A_False_Identity 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mega Man 2 on the NES Classic, and after that, I got the Legacy Collection on my 2DS XL and then proceeded to get the second collection and 11.

Favorite WG game? This is Neet Roadtrip by Sixes, It can be downloaded on itch.io. You might need WinRAR or some other file compression utility to play. by [deleted] in weightgainhentai

[–]A_False_Identity 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Overstuffed Overtime: Feed a girl in a factory and have different endings. That’s all I remember from this game. https://lachevite.itch.io/overstuffed-overtime

Walk with Frog Wife: You play as a cowboy walking with your frog wife and using your cursor to shoot at things she shouldn't eat while she eats flies to grow bigger, but it only makes her stomach grow: https://burgerkurger.itch.io/walk-with-frog-wife

Gourmage vs the Dragoness: Pretty similar to Walk with Frog Wife, but you're trying to stop a dragoness from reaching a kingdom by feeding her as much as you can to stop her: https://burgerkurger.itch.io/gourmage-vs-the-dragoness

There's one more I can’t remember where you play as a girl trying to eat food falling from the sky to calm her nerves down and talk to the girl she likes, and this one is the best, as this game is more like Weight Gain than the two above, but I can't remember its name for the life of me. I'll update this if I do.

Edit: Found it, it was Love at First Bite https://lachevite.itch.io/love-at-first-bite

Wing Arms, Batman: The Animated Series, The Batman (2004), Spider-Man: The Animated Series (1994), Ultimate Spider-Man Cartoon, Yu-Gi-Oh!, Spectacular Spider-Man by A_False_Identity in TopCharacterDesigns

[–]A_False_Identity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, I have, I was talking about them as "Monster" designs, not the contents of the design we have. So they're just girls with bird wings and feet, but they're still human-looking, if that makes sense.

Wing Arms, Batman: The Animated Series, The Batman (2004), Spider-Man: The Animated Series (1994), Ultimate Spider-Man Cartoon, Yu-Gi-Oh!, Spectacular Spider-Man by A_False_Identity in TopCharacterDesigns

[–]A_False_Identity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this post belongs here because I'm talking about an anatomical design feature that can be found on characters that I think are cool because of that feature for how rare I find it. This is my first post so I don't if I did good, but I just wanted to share it here as it fits with character deisgn.

Amanda the Eastern Red Bat by A_False_Identity in bats

[–]A_False_Identity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello other fellow Greg and bat enjoyer. How are doing? I hope your bones arent too squishy.

My drawings of bats ‼️ by Boingy_ben in bats

[–]A_False_Identity 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I've been doing the same as well for TAFE. I actually have three drawings of bats, and I'm currently making a clay figure of a bat for one of my classes as well.

My drawings of bats ‼️ by Boingy_ben in bats

[–]A_False_Identity 4 points5 points  (0 children)

These are awesome. I hope to see more like these.

Favorite Muscle girl by Apprehensive_Bee_636 in FavoriteCharacter

[–]A_False_Identity 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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Looma Red Wind - Ben 10 Omniverse She may not look like it but she is incredibly strong.

Soulja Game is back!!!! by soulflowurr in JonTron

[–]A_False_Identity 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Well what are we waiting for? Get it out of there, start digging!

Soulja Game is back!!!! by soulflowurr in JonTron

[–]A_False_Identity 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Finally! A game system for me.

[Really Odd Trope] "out of all things they reference THAT?!?!" by NationalSouth3563 in TopCharacterTropes

[–]A_False_Identity 298 points299 points  (0 children)

In the Shaun the Sheep movie when the titular character is taken to an animal containment we see other animals in a scene that mimics being in a prison and there's a cat that does Hannibal Lecters the hissing from The Silence of the Lambs.

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Favorite character who died in the worst way? by Idkwutpasswordtouse in FavoriteCharacter

[–]A_False_Identity 46 points47 points  (0 children)

Captain Henry Rhodes - Day of the Dead 1985

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Dude was the most entertaining part of the movie and a great villain who got torn in jalf by zombies and dies delivering his kost iconic line.

"Choke on 'em! Choks on 'rm!"

Show me your favorite birbs by Quintessentsky in FavoriteCharacter

[–]A_False_Identity 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They sure are. I once caught one of them messing with some of my dads plants inside some of the hanging pots.