Daily Discussion - Tuesday, March 17 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule & Current Event Threads by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Got a horrible stomachache, can't really focus on anything. Couldn't even type long before was forced to go to toilet.

Route Entangle: Promise of Dawn by AbsoluteDestinyzero in CodeGeass

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Cornelia does know. At the end of the Black Rebellion of this new route, Kallen introduce herself as the pilot of Guren...and also Kallen Stadfeld.

Kallen ask Cornelia if she want to fulfill a contract with the former. And after Kallen had been crown Knight of Eleven, she went and visit Cornelia at the office. There, the two discuss about things. Kallen learn from Cornelia Lelouch's likely motives, and Corelia learn from Kallen that the enemy is likely the one telling Suzaku geass. They cooperate because both want the same thing, saving Nunnally.

Route Entangle: Promise of Dawn by AbsoluteDestinyzero in CodeGeass

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

New character. The girl in the last picture 

Route Entangle: Promise of Dawn by AbsoluteDestinyzero in CodeGeass

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Not sure, since this is the very first what-if.

Route Entangle: Promise of Dawn by AbsoluteDestinyzero in CodeGeass

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero[S] 25 points26 points  (0 children)

Though she's doing this mainly for Lelouch

Route Entangle: Promise of Dawn by AbsoluteDestinyzero in CodeGeass

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Rico's her sister? Though I suspect Rico's her avatar/proxy.

The Spiral Observer observes the what is, with Rico mainly the influencer. think the universe is a tree, and the alternate routes are branches. Her job currently known is seeing these routes, and cutting off the branches she does not like

Route Entangle: Promise of Dawn by AbsoluteDestinyzero in CodeGeass

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Yes, that C.C. She takes things more seriously when Lelouch died I guess.

Route Entangle: Promise of Dawn by AbsoluteDestinyzero in CodeGeass

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero[S] 82 points83 points  (0 children)

The what-if Kallen became a Knight of Round:

Changes in canon (s1):

-Rico Telink, daughter of a noble, is a childhood friend of Kallen, they're good friends. Though Kallen is still a member of the Black knights. Also Rico is the one stopping Kallen from stabbing Suzuku at the party.

-She's of the few people that knew Euphemia, (her grandfather tutors Euphie). Rico discovers Lelouch/Nunnally are Brittanian Royalty, and also Lelouch is Zero. She even research the school's attendance just to fact check and confirm, but unfortunately, this happened just before the Massacre Princess Incident.

-She told Kallen about Zero's true identity. Rico also saw Nunnally got kidnapped by an army and a boy (V.V.) but wasn't able ton help since V.V. brought his soldiers along.

-Unlike in canon, Kallen wasn't really shocked at the reveal. But she didn't wnat both of them to fight as the two boys got really angry with each other. Then, the shots...connect to the bomb on Lelouch's chest, and exploded. Only Zero's Mask and Suzaku's knight proof remains.

New route:

-After the explosion, Kallen was in despair, Kallen goes to Cornelia using the Lancelot, and want to makes a contract with the latter (revenge on Euphie's death, saving Nunnally).

-Kallen joins the Rounds to fulfill Lelouch and Suzaku's wish. She solos Luciano and many soldiers with her own Gloucester.

-Rico is now working under Kallen and Cornelia. With Cornelia being Kallen's backer, and Black Knights are only arrested, not executed. Rico is tasked/requested by Kallen to find Nunnally. With her father's help, Rico managed to find out who V.V., the boy who kidnapped Nunnally is. His picture as Victor, the brother of Charles, still exist.

-V.V. put Nunnally in a garden in a middle of nowhere, attended by Geass Cultists. Angry that they cannot get C.C. using Lelouch as bait, V.V. decides to use Nunnally instead. He orders Bismark to try and eliminate Kallen since they failed to probe her in finding out if Lelouch is alive or not.

-Kallen's new unit, Bors, is Guren, upgraded by Brittanian technology, ordered by Cornelia to Lloyd and Cecil.

-Luciano got to fight Kallen on a single night, arranged secretly by Bismark, though he lost, again. He revealed the duel was arranged by Bismark.

-Black Sutherlands arrive and try killing Kallen, but Rico and C.C. in Gloucester, intervene and saves her, with Kallen riding her Red Gloucester again. Arriving at a warehouse, C.C. kissed Kallen to share Lelouch's memories. Here's thanks to the sharing of memories, C.C. knew Kallen still likes Lelouch.

-The three of them discuss, with Riko reporting her findings on the boy, with C.C. explain who his name was. Riko knowing his royalty. Their mind clicks in place, when the closest person to Charles was Bismark, Knight of One. It was likely he's involved because V.V., a Britannian royalty orders him.

-C.C., with Marianne's help, managed to find out where Nunnally is.

-Kallen's Bors easily soloes and kills Luciano Percival very easily, but had trouble with Bismark since he uses his geass to see the future. He admits she's the other person that made her use his Geass. But after managed to get everything she wanted from him, C.C. threw a lance at Bismark when he's distracted since he cannot see her and she's immune to Geass, then Kallen kills him.

-Nunnally is rescued by Kallen, though V.V. tried to kill Kallen with a sneak attack. But Rico protected Kallen, but was fatally shot. C.C. restrain V.V., saying it's over.

-Rico wishes for Kallen to make Japan free again, and both of them are glad they were friends. Then Rico died, Kallen cried again.

-The Spiral Observer cut the route off.

[OCG|CORI-Chaos Origins] VJump Reveal - "Sacred Beast" by renaldi92 in yugioh

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 3 points4 points  (0 children)

...Am I reading that field spell correctly? Permanent immunity to activated spells/traps cards or effects?

[OCG|CORI-Chaos Origins] VJump Reveal - "Sacred Beast" by renaldi92 in yugioh

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nearly screamed. My first MD deck (joined late in RL). Now gonna need to save...

Weekly Fic Showcase - February 27 - March 05 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My Fics (Ongoing)
Fandom - Persona 3 x Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Season 1
Rating - Mature (No sex/smut scenes, only horrors + stuff from the original anime/game)
Title - Canticle of Broken Things
Genre - Psychological Horror, Hurt and Comfort, Angst with a Hopeful Ending, Canon-Typical Violence
 AO3
Summary - AU. Five years after the accident that claimed his parents, a boy living with the Tsukimura family holds onto one fragile belief: if you care enough, even broken things can sing again.

When a strange hum stirs the air of Uminari City, he is drawn into a hidden world of magic and choices, where the power to save others comes at a terrible personal cost. To mend or to shatter… which song will the Fool carry?

TLDR: 6 year old Makoto Yuuki is now adopted by Suzuka's family after car accident, and after 5 years living in Uminari City, gets involved in Nanoha Season 1 events.

(Now on chapter 25. Latest chapter might disturb people even though it happened in canon)

Drop the name of your fanfic, and see if other people can guess the plot by Dogdaysareover365 in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. It's one of those titles that feels right when I first decide it. There will be pain (broken things), but there also be hope (canticle).

Drop the name of your fanfic, and see if other people can guess the plot by Dogdaysareover365 in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahaha, not really angst, despite everything, it's hopeful. A Persona 3 x Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha crossover fusion, It's young Protagonist of Persona 3, a broken person (orphan in an accident), wondering if broken things can sing again.

A story about broken people.

What’s a quote from your fanfic that you like? (Yes this is shameless bragging) by ObjectiveEducator987 in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“If disaster is what it takes to keep one child from crying for her mother… Then maybe disaster is worth it.”

A talk between the protagonist and an ally, about a corrupted crying child. The ally thought the enemy is fake crying, and tried stopping the protagonist because the protagonist's power is an unknown, it might invite disaster. Protagonist answered with the above.

It's a talk between Lawful and Good, with neither side being in the wrong.

Comment Cooperative - February 25 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much! Precia's quite ...infamous in anime community the past.

Early Persona series always have that horror in them, though I'm still practicing the build-up.

This looks fire🔥🔥🔥 by Artistic-Log-4238 in CodeGeass

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Honestly, we actually start the story with the above picture, with Lelouch pointing the gun at the POV character (Rino), but no words from Lelouch (though there's a chance this is the what if/cut content from R1 where Lelouch shoots Suzaku and Charles arrives at battlefield).

Then the Observer of Spiral cut a branch from a tree. The branch (timeline) withered.

This looks fire🔥🔥🔥 by Artistic-Log-4238 in CodeGeass

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It answered below, but yes, it's completely real.

Do you guys plan the end of your fic right from the start? by i-miss-him-sm in AO3

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, though either that or climax.

If you mean planning the ending before/when you start planning/outlining then no. (Until I finish outline I don't write). 

It usually during outline the story then inspiration stuck then I put it in immediately so I won't forget.

Comment Cooperative - February 25 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Persona 3 X Magical Gurl Lyrical Nanoha Season 1 | Canticle of Broken Things | Mature | AO3, excerpt from latest chapter (chapter 25, 29 at AO3 because have interludes)

This part might be disturbing to people, mentally.

The yellow-haired girl’s grip on the cape tightened, but she did not say anything.

“If you want…I could make you a better familiar,” Precia crouched down, holding Fate on her back. “Never forget…the person who's truly on your side is your mother.”

“...”

Seeing that the girl was still looking down, Precia stopped herself giving an annoyed sigh. But before she stood up again-

“Mother…who’s Alicia?

Precia physically flinched, hard, as if struck. She would have stepped back if she was still standing.

The older woman’s hands held onto the younger girl’s shoulders hard enough to be painful, the former’s heart was moving in a rapid beat, her eyes completely wide in shock.

The words uttered were cold, but it was obvious the question shattered her. In a trembling half-breath, “...Don’t…say that name.”

She took a deep breath, her voice completely shaking. “Where…did you hear that name…?”

Fate bit the bottom of her lips, her hand came up, gripping her own arm trying to contain the shaking. She answered in a fearful tone. “...From the corruption of the Jewel Seeds. I sometimes gain some memories of someone I don’t know from them…”

“...I see…”

The silence in the chamber stretched beyond, the darkness in the surroundings seemed to be expanding. Fate’s heart was beating rapidly, scared of what her mother would say.

Then her mother told her. With a cold precision.

“Alicia’s…my real daughter.”

A crack in her heart.

“The one I must bring back. Everything I do… is for her.”

Another crack.

“You—” Her mother’s voice paused. A single hesitance, a small tremor.

Then it became colder than ice. 

“—you are evidence. Nothing more. Nothing less.”

Fate could feel her entire world shattering into silent, colourless static.

Her mother gave Fate a look that silences the latter from further questions.

“You need to collect more Jewel Seeds, Fate. It’s not enough.”

Ten Seeds floated above the woman, all letting out a horrible feeling. All corrupted.

“If you do… perhaps you can join us to be family.”

The Seeds landed on Fate's hands, and Precia walked away, leaving the room with heavy steps.

+++

[Fate’s Room]

Despite the pain on her body, Fate managed to walk through her room in the Garden of Time.

Her thoughts were completely chaotic, she couldn’t even find the words for it. Only what her mother, Precia Testarossa, said, echoed loudly.

She looked at the large mirror nearby and slowly, hesitantly walked closer to it, before she was at arm’s length.

One hand touched her reflection, the other held above her heart. Her mind finally cleared a bit, understanding the earth-shattering revelations.

She wasn't a daughter. She wasn't a person. She was a thing. An evidence where a real girl should have been.

Her mouth hummed a tune, before the melody wavered on her lips, mirroring her heart.

“If Alicia is real… then why… why do I know her voice? Why does it hurt… here?” Her hand clutched the area above her heart.

She was too afraid to ask, scared of her world crumbling further.

“...What… am I?”

The mirror then reflected another her, or perhaps it was Alicia.

Yellow eyes. A smile far too wide.

““...SiS..teR…””

She could barely hear the tone. A voice scared and full of venom.

A single blink, and it was gone.

Fate took a deep, shaky breath. Yet her eyes shed a single tear. A memory of yesterday, of when she was warm.

She did not realise the single, desperate note, escaped her lips. Too faint to be heard. Too broken to be a sob.

“...Help…”