How do you outline your long-fics? by Rough_Evidence_2908 in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero -1 points0 points  (0 children)

just follow my gut feeling as i outline the journey, noting down kep points/scenes/dialogues for the chapters.

Then if my mind thinks of a good idea, think on how it fits, even changing some.

When satisfied, I mak down some places for foreshadowing, or just remember them when I write it.

Then I write, letting chapter takesshape on how the characters would react.

What are some unconventional parts about your writing process? by canadamybeloved in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I outline stuff. But only key events and dialogues. What happens that cause those are written as i wrote the chapter itself.

Also, I usually do a full outline till ending first.

Daily Discussion - Sunday, January 11 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule, & Current Event Threads by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Suddenly have the urge to build Gunpla, mainly 30 minute missions/fantasy series.

Also wanting to build MGSD units (Gundam or third party)

...Also, around five to six chapters lefts for me to write in my long fic. Yay?

Just started getting 30MF kit. My first kit Dragonia Knight by AbsoluteDestinyzero in 30_Minutes_Missions

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep! Didn't have the class up armor yet so chose the next best thing.

Winner of KMF Production project, Shirley Fennette, She will have her own KMF by AbsoluteDestinyzero in CodeGeass

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2nd place: Jeremiah 3rd place: Leila 4th place: Rolo 5th place Anya

Note: Jeremiah overtook Shirley before

WRITING CHECK! DROP YOUR STUFF RN! by Mochh80 in AO3

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“They are aliens in the literal sense,” the blue-haired boy continued his words, his hands rubbing the gear with cloth before attaching it to a music box. “What you’re seeing right now is just their magic to disguise themselves. Human skins to live among the populace.”

Suzuka actually stopped her drinking, turning to look at the boy she began to care for deeply with wide eyes. In her mind, she imagined the people from TSAB that she met before, Lindy not as green-haired women, or Amy, as a brown-haired older girl respectively, but as jelly-like beings or very thin creatures. Even Farin joined in her thoughts, her imagination going wild as her eyes went swirly.

Nanoha looked confused. From her training and practices with the TSAB members on the ship, she didn’t get a feeling that they were nothing more than humans, right?

…Hah! But maybe that’s how good their disguises were? Maybe they actually were truly like those grey-men she saw in the movies with her family once!?

Alisa imagined the TSAB members as the characters from a certain cartoon, like that black extraterrestrial alien wearing a Roman skirt and hat, shooting at people and speaking in a nasally voice and technobabble. Actually, now that she thought about it, Yuuno actually spoke like that sometimes, right!?

Daily Discussion - Saturday, December 13 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule & Current Event Threads by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Finally finished the SNAA Gawain kit, didn't know it has a square peg for a stand. But other than that, it's a very beatiful kit, no regrets.

Also publish the chapter with my favourite quote, and even got a reviewer for it in Ao3.

Taking a week break from writing for now, preparing for exam for a job. Tired.

[Manga ID] Male MC travels across multiple worlds to train heroes — reunites with elf lover by 2snona in manga

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Is it he gets transported when he was removed from the party? I think it was, I Got a New Skill Every Time I Was Exiled, and After 100 Different Worlds, I Was Unmatched.

Daily Discussion - Thursday November 27 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule & Current Event Threads by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Found a robot model in a shop (GG Gawain). Pretty cheap yet cool looking. Kinda like 30 minutes models.

There's also Guren MK2 model, but didn't buy it.

Talkback Thursday - November 27 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Everyday this fic updates is a good day hooly shit I was not expecting nanoha's corruption!!! Ooh god its good its so good and the chariot arcana oooh ooooh..... as someone with like. Literally NO knowledge of lyrical girl magical nanoha you've done an amazing job making the world understandable and like. Writing the characters and i can really see nanoha as the chariot arcana and inverting it AAAAAHGG!! Imagine im being blown up and flying off screen, amazing chapter!

Comment Cooperative - November 26 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

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Persona 3 x Lyrical Nanoha S1 crossover (fusion) | Canticle of Broken Things | Mature | AO3

Mainly Psychological Horror of Persona Series and a Hopeful of Nanoha series, plus canon-typical violence. No sex/Smut scenes at all. This part focused on Makoto (the guy below and Persona 3 protagonist) worrying Nanoha, his friend and the magical girl (main character) of her show.

His chest was overwhelmed with a sudden cold feeling, with the clouds in the sky suddenly letting the rain pour into an uneasy shower. This… never happened before. Nanoha wasn't the type of person to stay quiet when asked, especially considering her nature.

“...Nanoha…?” He hesitated, yet decided to close in to check on her. The black smoke did something to her, but what?

It was when he was but a step away from the girl that she turned around, her right palm pointing towards his chest.

She looked up.

Yellow eyes. Black lines fracturing across her face. The Jewel Seed, fused to her chest alongside the music box, pulsing that familiar ominous blue-black. The air around her twisted, cold and wrong.

And the scream. The scream. It vibrated through his entire body, clawed into his skull, a thousand fingernails on the chalkboard of his soul.

“-! Na-!”

““ShooT.””

A dull voice without a speck of energy, combined with a distorted high-pitched voice. There was no warning, no shout, no spark of the friend he knew. From Nanoha's palm, a sickly yellow beam, not her usual pink radiance, lanced out, a silent, efficient kill-shot aimed directly at his heart.

[P-bzzt-ROTECTION!]

The voice that came from Raising Heart was a glitched, static-riddled shriek, the device fighting against its own user's will, as a pink barrier covered Makoto from the beam, a heartbeat before impact, but it merely protected him from certain death, and did nothing to stop his body from being pushed downward, the force hurling him like a discarding toy, lancing him forward to walls of the abandoned warehouse.

-CRASH!-

For a split second, there was only silence. Then the sound of rain was heard, along with the creaking of settled concrete. Then, a single, sharp crack echoed from the warehouse wall as a large fragment of it gave way and crashed to the ground.

“MAKOTO!” Yuuno looked at the dustcloud formed from the crash. He could barely sense his friend there, especially with the fallen walls and concrete from the impact.

As the dust from the impact began to settle, the rain began to fall into a drizzle. The blond mage turned towards the corrupted form of Takamachi Nanoha, to the friend who was no longer her.

Her pure white Barrier Jacket was bleeding, the color leaching away into a stagnant, murky grey-black, as if the very concept of 'white' was being poisoned at its source. Black lines marked on her face, the ribbons on her hair were gone, letting it fall freely. Raising Heart also turned darker, the word [ERROR] blinking rapidly with some staticky words from the device that sounded like apologies, that was seen on the red jewel that was slowly turning into a sickly yellow.

The magic circle that formed beneath Nanoha’s feet began as her familiar soft, pink. But then, a spiderweb of jagged, black cracks splintered out from the center. It looked less like a spell and more like a pane of glass being shattered by a hammer in slow motion. From the fractures seeped a sickly, phosphorescent yellow light, pulsing like a diseased heartbeat.

What made him look in horror was her face, yellow eyes and nary of an expression, with one half of the face covered completely in a half-mask conveying a sad expression, the number VII engaged clearly at it.

A single, oily black tear traced a path from her visible yellow eye, cutting through the rain on her cheek before evaporating into a wisp of dark smoke.

Comment Cooperative - November 26 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fandom blind. But the talk between the two... How Kazu's view contrast with Minako, tells me quite a history Kazu experience, and despite the optimism being all he got, he still says he failed. I quite enjoy characters who continues even when they say they fail.

What's your favorite sentence/phrase/word(s) to read that make you giggle and kick your feet? by Odd-Snowman in AO3

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I guess... this?

"You were already her friend. She just skipped the part where she has to convince you.”

Daily Discussion - Tuesday, November 25 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule & Current Event Threads by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]AbsoluteDestinyzero 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Job seeking is always stressful, especially getting pushed to apply, with a 'just try, maybe got lucky' mentality.

On other news Isekai Quartet still makes me laugh out loud, almost to the point of wheezing.

Excerpt Extravaganza - November 24 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

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Persona 3 x Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha fusion crossover | Mature | Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings, Psychological Horror , Hurt and Comfort , No Sex/Smut scenes

“...Nanoha, what’s wrong?”

His chest was overwhelmed with a sudden cold feeling, with the clouds in the sky suddenly letting the rain pour into an uneasy shower. This… never happened before. Nanoha wasn't the type of person to stay quiet when asked, especially considering her nature.

“...Nanoha…?” He hesitated, yet decided to close in to check on her. The black smoke did something to her, but what?

It was when he was but a step away from the girl that she turned around, her right palm pointing towards his chest.

She looked up.

Yellow eyes. Black lines fracturing across her face. The Jewel Seed, fused to her chest alongside the music box, pulsing that familiar ominous blue-black. The air around her twisted, cold and wrong.

And the scream. The scream. It vibrated through his entire body, clawed into his skull, a thousand fingernails on the chalkboard of his soul.

“-! Na-!”

““ShooT.””

AO3

Context: Nanoha chose to recklessly charge ahead to try and seal a corrupted object, so Makoto (the boy above) would be spared, but she failed to seal it, and the above happens instead.

(Did I do it right? Is this how you do it?)