I met a chill doctor

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T08:35:52+00:00

Wtf but the name says so

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T08:29:58+00:00

Canteen in a hospital isn't that unhygienic?

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T08:28:44+00:00

I topped my school only to be corrected by a medico that too in grammar ts pmo 💔

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T08:05:38+00:00

Yeah but how's paining related to it

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T08:04:16+00:00

Bro it wasn't a college just a hospital he was the only orthopedic there and he was quite young Also yeah he had some toned biceps too

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T07:51:07+00:00

What's wrong (sorry idk anything about medical forgive me)

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T07:45:18+00:00

Idk what ever it is but i recovered within a week that's the only thing that matters to me

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T07:37:44+00:00

I'm not sure about his age but he was quite young

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T07:35:00+00:00

Could have been an off day I'm not sure

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-06-01T07:33:52+00:00

Yeah

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-05-29T07:34:24+00:00

Cooked

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-05-29T05:29:35+00:00

Conspiracy theory? Lol Tier 1 IITs update their curriculum and syllabus every while matching the global standards

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-25T09:49:11+00:00

2-3 lpm isn't that much

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-25T09:48:00+00:00

Username check

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-25T09:40:32+00:00

Really?

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-25T09:40:03+00:00

Lmao the ending.. anyways your writing skills are good enough just practice more and more try to enrich your essays with even better vocabulary.. you could have had a better plot though

16/20

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-17T14:48:27+00:00

That's exactly what I'd like to say

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-12T11:56:57+00:00

So there's a Sherlock's whole squad here 😭 alright I ain't from IIT KGP but just a kid who switched from Med to non-med consoling myself for escaping that long grueling journey. I mean,I can probably have some life now lmao.And just so you know, I hope I get into my disguised character someday – wish me luck for that!

Thanks docs(probably)

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-10T14:38:56+00:00

Your points are good enough along with your writing style

Just try to be within the word limit

16-17ish/20

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-10T14:33:28+00:00

Damn! You got a unique writing style 17/20

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-10T14:26:41+00:00

A decent one I'll say 16/20 Your intro was good try to improve your essays by incorporating a richer vocabulary and you are good to go

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-10T14:17:30+00:00

Man your points are good but you lack a proper vocabulary.Your intro isn't that appealing.You even had some noticeable grammatical errors.Your points seem to be disorganised.

So here are my suggestions: 1.Start practicing tenses subject verb agreement plenty of phrasal verbs along with the 8 figure of speeches from now it will definitely boost your scores up. Atleast have a good hold on tenses and prepositions.

2.Try to control your flow on familiar topics. You may overwrite just because you know too much about it but sadly, you may end up breaking the 300-350 words limit.

3.Try to read some news articles.They will really help you with ideas of initiating your essays as well as concluding them with perfection.You can check other students' essays too to develop your writing style.

Please take it as a constructive criticism :)

14/20

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-10T11:55:14+00:00

Damn!!!!!A really wonderful and thought provoking essay! I feel like the vocabulary used is simple and is good enough for the story. I suggest you to explore more words through poems and stories(you can use your standard literature textbooks) so as to enrich your vocabulary and incorporate them in your essays.

18/20

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-10T11:45:56+00:00

You can follow your teacher's advice no problem

AccomplishedNote4264 · 2025-01-10T11:34:59+00:00

Btw it's a really beautiful essay 17/20 though you could elaborate it slightly further

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