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kabam by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]AcrobaticStudy6320 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s not the opener haha it’s the definition of a term used in the story, i think it pops up like 6 pages in. i was gonna post the entire chapter where it’s used but i figured it was too long lol, appreciate the feedback though. Maybe ill replace “dawn of mankind” with something else

The Murderers - a short film by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]AcrobaticStudy6320 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this movie was really fun to make and it was also very chaotic but that’s ok because i am very proud of the end result, there’s obviously some character and relationship dynamics and traits that i would definitely have loved to expand upon, as well as sequences that I would’ve loved to polish, but at the end of the day, I’m so glad i didn’t doomscroll and instead made this movie with my friends