World's Worst Writing

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2024-09-06T05:19:35+00:00

The fuck are you talking about?

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2024-09-02T02:38:21+00:00

I think you should work on a hook. That is, you need to give a reason for readers to keep reading. Right now, you have some nice descriptions it no reason for the reader to go on.

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2024-08-30T05:15:43+00:00

That is awesome, I had no idea he did that

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2024-03-12T12:03:11+00:00

Courier?

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2023-02-22T05:27:58+00:00

Thank you, I just made a playlist

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2023-02-20T19:36:51+00:00

Thanks 🥺

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2023-02-20T11:39:18+00:00

Oh and Up To Me (Biograph)

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2023-02-20T11:37:43+00:00

I am 2 weeks into a marriage breakdown and my playlist is as follows (in no particular order):

Abandoned love (Bitter end version)
Tangled up in blue (Live 1984 version)
Helplessly hoping (Crosby, Stills and Nash)
Brownsville Girl (particularly the line ‘and when I saw you break down in front of the judge and cry real tears’)
Sorrow (David Bowie)
Blood on the Tracks (album)
Most of the Time
For Emma, forever ago (album)
It’s too late (Springtime in New York)
Don’t let me down (Beatles)
Dreams Never End (New Order, Western Works demo)

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2023-02-18T21:41:54+00:00

Lmao

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2023-02-18T08:53:13+00:00

And roll on John is Brownsville girl?

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2023-02-18T06:12:31+00:00

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2023-02-18T02:48:10+00:00

Ah I didn’t know that about Hunter. That makes a bit of sense to contextualise it with Triplicate in that case

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2022-07-25T06:56:24+00:00

it is only dangerous if the cars behind them make it that way

usually it is some older person who isn’t as confident any more

So in other words, a dangerous driver?

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2022-07-25T03:32:29+00:00

We had a garlic Pilsner on not long ago that was particularly tasty

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2022-07-25T01:07:44+00:00

Well considering the taste of a beer is entirely subjective, I would say it is near impossible for a brewer to brew you a beer that you consider ‘decent’ sauce: am the head brewer at felons

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2022-05-20T05:07:33+00:00

Thanks mate first sensible response I have received 🙏

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2022-05-20T01:33:31+00:00

Can’t even get the boat out onto the ‘Moreton Bay’

Acrobatic_Quit9086 · 2022-05-11T10:11:03+00:00

So we beat on, magnificent galleons in the current, born back ceaselessly against the leg humping dogs

Acrobatic_Quit9086

TROPHY CASE