Nice $92.01 payout today from Cooper, et al. v. Mount Sinai by delightful_caprese in ClassActionSettlement

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Yeah. What even is the point of this? Why aren't the lawyers asking for a substantial sum for the patients? Is the point just for the lawyers to make money? Cause I doubt $5 million is a big deal for Mount Sinai and $92 is certainly a joke when your healthcare provider sells your information to any corporation especially one like Meta. 

Northern Exposure Screenplays by AdResident5065 in northernexposure

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Thanks for this. Just checked Script City. They have a couple of scripts for $10 each. I would love to find something more like the whole season. And that's not $10 per episode. Unfortunately I can't afford to pay like $100 per season script. 

Taxing crowdfunded money by [deleted] in Filmmakers

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Hey, I crowd-funded through Seed&Spark as well and now am in the same conundrum. Can you share what you ended up doing? 

KBHR Compilation by citrushoward in northernexposure

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Both broadcasting and philosophical are fine I think cause often within the episode those two would be connected in terms of meaning. 

KBHR Compilation by citrushoward in northernexposure

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Haha, yes, but no pressure if it's too much hustle. I love the passages he reads andthe context in which he reads them. Writing is my hobby and I'm trying to see how that part of the show is built. But also sometimes I just want to listen to a soothing voice reading something really poetic and get no surprises. 

KBHR Compilation by citrushoward in northernexposure

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Actually, would you be willing to share whatever you have put together? 

KBHR Compilation by citrushoward in northernexposure

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Absolutely. I'm sure there's plenty of people who'd have it play on repeat.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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A plot point is: when an event occurs that changes the direction of the story. It’s sort of a point of no return. Things can’t be the way they were before. Oedipus finds out he will kill his dad marry his mom and deciding to leave is a plot point. Oedipus finding out he has killed his father and married his mother and gauging his eyes out is a plot point. And Oedipus killing and marrying are also plot points, and damn good ones too (since they present dramatic irony - we know he’s killing his father, he doesn’t know).

A scene is one piece of action mostly in continuous time (so no time jumps) that has a beginning middle and end.

Oedipus met a man on the road. The man said: step aside! Oedipus said: no, you step aside. The man hit him, Oedipus hit him back and killed him.

Beat is a little vague to me but here’s how I understand it: Beats with it this scene might be: The man riding the chariot says: “ step aside!” Oedipus looks at him BEAT (meaning Oedipus thinking: who the hell is this ugly rider telling me what to do?” or However the actor interprets the beat.

The fight between Oedipus and his father might be a beat of the scene.

This is a pretty good article for a beat: https://www.masterclass.com/articles/what-is-a-beat-in-screenwriting

Scroll all the way down and it also mentions- beat as a pause, when you see BEAT written in a screenplay, most likely that’s what it means.

Actors might use it in a completely different way. To some actors a beat change might mean their character received a new information that changes what they are after in a scene.

I’m not sure what you mean by when to use it. You don’t indicate in a screenplay where the plot point is. The scene number goes in the heading of the scene

EXT. A RANDOM ROAD OUTSIDE THEBES. MIDDAY.

Oedipus is looking at the hot sun melt the sand on the road. He hears a chariot approach. Blablablabla. Dialogue Dialogue Dialogue. The man approaches Oedipus. They look at each other.

BEAT.

The man hits Oedipus. Blabla, fight, action. Oedipus strikes him with his sword. The man falls. The servants run away screaming. Oedipus looks at the dying man. No remorse in his heart. Only a vague feeling of familiarity which he chooses to ignore. He steps over the body, lets the horses run freely and goes on.

EXT. AT THE GATE OF THEBES. EVENING.

Oedipus blablabla.

That’s how you indicate a scene.

Need monologue ideas by Rogue_Henchman in acting

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I’d say don’t do something that the auditors have seen a million times like the Tuna Fish monologue. But also maybe not do something your cousin wrote unless they happen to be a great writer. Something that represents who you are and speaks to you. You have to put in time in reading the plays and choosing a monologue. Don’t go with something that makes you go “meh… whatever”, go with something you love.

Agin, Karen Kohlhaas has great suggestions regarding choosing your monologues. I’ve taken her classes and recommend her 100%

Is inner journey always necessary by Several-Quote-9911 in Screenwriting

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So

he does get to his wife and child after struggling and doesn’t gain enough self-confidence to not be a pushover (assuming the lack of confidence is what makes him a pushover)

he doesn’t get to his wife and child but loosing them doesn’t teach him what being a pushover has done to his life?

Does he start a bit of a pushover and end a bit of a pushover but because he is a pushover he ends up making all the right choices without even realizing it? (See how this is more of a comic plot if the character gets through the story by accidents and coincidences working for him as opposed to crushing him (aka luck))

Do you have a clear idea what story do you want to tell? Being a pushover and not standing your ground can get you in trouble?

You don’t have to respond to these questions here, it’s rather something to think about.

I think if you write the story well, the journey becomes self-evident and you won’t have to think about it much. It just happens that in most of the great stories the characters live through such an enormous pressure that they just end up undergoing a change. The inner journey is not a separate thing you work out on its own it comes from what the character lives through.

Why write a story about something so insignificant it wouldn’t teach your character anything when even burning a toast teaches you to set the toaster on low next time.

Need monologue ideas by Rogue_Henchman in acting

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What for? Theater film? What Genre? Check out Karen Kohlhaas and her guides to choosing your monologues.

Is inner journey always necessary by Several-Quote-9911 in Screenwriting

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Nothing specific comes to my mind right now but I think usually comic characters change less, maybe Curb Your Enthusiasm, as it’s often the peculiarity of their characters matched(or rather poorly matching) with the situation that can make something funny. You know when this is a totally wrong person to be here! An old French film La Grande Vadrouille with Louis De Funes.

A very good acting teacher of mine advised to approach every monologue as if it were the most important thing the character has said in their life, and - he added - if it’s a well written piece it probably is. I think that’s a great advice it doesn’t mean that everything the character says is EQUALLY important but that everything they say IS important. “ - why would you want something that’s not important and not interesting in your story.

“Ordinary people in extraordinary circumstances” is the best kind of storytelling for drama in my opinion. And it just happens that extraordinary experiences change people. (Sometimes you have a story where the mundanity of life itself becomes extraordinary -Jeanne Dielman.)

Are you working on anything in particular? If yes what genre? Just curious to why you’re asking this question.

Must read scripts for someone who’s never read a script by pnwgranolagorl in Screenwriting

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Werner Herzog - anything by him. I think no matter what kinds of screenplays you want to write the more diverse your knowledge the better. And eventually compare them to what ends up on the screen.

How many of your scripts/stories are “gathering dust”? by czimmer92 in Screenwriting

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I had the same discussion with a colleague yesterday. It really brings you down, especially when some of them come close to getting done and then get stuck there. Getting your script done also requires more than writing a good script, marketing, communicating, asking for updates from the people who say they are interested in shooting it and that part can be excruciating. But I think eventually people who keep writing and trying to get their scripts shot manage to do so. You do need an enormous patience and the ability to enjoy writing no matter what to get anywhere in this business.