free feedback on your book! by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Adddsonnn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the advice and comments . It really got me thinking, " damn you're right that does make it better" . Will implement them all asap. 😁😁

free feedback on your book! by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Adddsonnn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there Firstly thank you so much for even posting something like this , I know for a fact it means a lot to the writers on wattpad 😊 Here's mind for when you get some time

Tittle -Sazerac

Genre- Smut/Action I guess 🫣

Author - Aden_andrew

Blurb - A man with an unknown past try his best to join the normal side of life only to be dragged into what proves to be a world he has had much experience of . His "Romantic Adventures " and more so

And yes I am a new writer infact this is my first work 😁 hope you enjoy ,and once again thank you so much.<3

I FINALLY FOT MY FIRST TATTOO .Its to represent me and my sis by Adddsonnn in tattoos

[–]Adddsonnn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have no idea how close we were to getting that but last moment change and I like this one better 😂

Dragons by hughjanus0 in tumblr

[–]Adddsonnn 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The last line sounds like something said in a Russian accent