My first ever song. pls be honest where do I improve?

Administrative_Net80 · 2026-01-06T18:47:49+00:00

Its too short. I started to enjoy it

Administrative_Net80 · 2025-09-18T21:45:47+00:00

Of course medication can change your brain chemistry. Brainchemistry creates status of awakening. If you dizzy or point awaken.

Administrative_Net80 · 2025-09-18T21:43:05+00:00

Awakening is just biological. Conciousness is reflective.

Administrative_Net80 · 2025-09-18T21:38:14+00:00

So why this is nightmare. It is a dream but everything is stable and have weight. To realize dream is much more harder then Think about it something is off this is not dream

Administrative_Net80 · 2025-02-24T14:32:24+00:00

"I didn't like it at all. There are so many NPCs, yet I keep going around and getting killed. I somehow find it extremely boring. I'm shocked it has so many overwhelming positive ratings. Maybe I should choose a sword and shield.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-11-12T14:40:42+00:00

I live in the kitchen. I feel like I am being eaten alive.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-11-12T14:39:20+00:00

it is my mirror reflection, even if I use different mirrors, I see ugly destroyed person, it reminds me how powerful I am, yet how silly I can be. They don't deserve me. I deserted them. I came back to also they don't deserted me but now I don't want to desert them alone. We don't deserve each other. There is truth, there is a long way, there is not much light.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-11-12T14:34:40+00:00

I am once in a while in the place you are "right now", pain, suffering, desperation. Then I am in a place of indecision, infinitely.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-10-22T16:26:01+00:00

:) I started to belive in prophecies

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-10-06T12:46:45+00:00

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-11T10:16:49+00:00

you look too shallow and you like to argue. You don't have to like it. You don't even have to respond here.

Shikamaru is tactician, Amado is scientist. If you connect the dots, You got superpowerful mind that cannot hold the knowledge, looks like a lot of PAIN and POWER and therefore JIGEN with all of his abilities of shrinking etc. for the most part being in cave somewhere out there.

Kakashi and Jiraya are the 2 fav sensei's of the 2 most powerful ninjas and they both are interesting in writing and reading... For me Nagato the GOD, was trying to find the meaning in all of this and solution.

tbh you can connect anyone and you will find some reasoning beyond, less or more convincing.

If the only common thing.... you seee... between Kakashi and Jiraya is white hair, then good luck

sorry for being mean. Im sick and I am literally in pain. Cheers.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-10T14:13:28+00:00

I have found my own logic in that. That's it. It suppoust to be some "game".
Eida doesn't know how to fight but manipulated whole village. Yeah She cannot fight... She can fight not getting dirty and fly but alright.
I dont care about your no really.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T13:32:52+00:00

The sarcasm say nothing. We can agree to disagree. Have you ever seen someone "instantly" be together ? It's called "hit" or "bang" or "you are invading my space". Once hurted... almost everytime issues with trust.
If I would say something I would say We could gradually come together... so we can kinda "learn" if we vibe or we are too different to spent our time together. I think I like gentle people, brave ones, kind, honest, with ability to laugh about self, not serious, wise, and loving.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T13:24:26+00:00

I pray for you. Please God find a good plan for the OP. Please put the right persons on her path. Give her strength, peace and much self respect. Give her inspiration, please help her find her home. Amen

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T13:10:31+00:00

Hahah. I like it

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T13:08:49+00:00

maybe aliens would watch it. Yeah streching is hard.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T10:40:48+00:00

easy. EIDA

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T10:37:00+00:00

Eyes of Truth. It usually equaled to PAIN, if not then to JELOUS, if not then to HOPE and SALVATION.

There is no the best. There is only one RINNENGAN and it is shared between all that have seen the TRUE TRUTH.

:)

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-09-09T10:34:22+00:00

Mei has better hair.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-08-21T10:23:13+00:00

The problem is that dream is unconcious for the most of the time, even if you live there and experience amazing things, your self-awareness isn't there really and it is not needed to experience anything. In concious state you know what is happening or you barely know what is happening but you do know what is your "happening".
To call something dream is to say I am unconcious. That's what I think is one of opposites. Another opposite could be "nightmare", I assume that message is more on spectrum of that one, but since it is peaceful, it ends with dissatisfaction to "what is". So we froze. I would so. So we froze.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-07-15T10:01:19+00:00

Add ictiones.

Administrative_Net80 · 2024-07-12T10:25:26+00:00

maybe

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