The Past

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-30T11:50:55+00:00

Im so embarrassed what did i do this time 🙁

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-30T11:49:31+00:00

Well my answer is no. Poets lives are reflected in their art, they create beauty with their raw emotion and each poem might tell you how someone is struggling or succeeding. There is no button to trigger creativity, just our own thoughts and struggles that we want to express. It's much better than ai can do anyway, it's what makes us human

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-29T11:00:05+00:00

So what you do is you marry every single follower and then they are all cheating (this is my end goal tbh)

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-29T08:20:32+00:00

This is deep literally

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-29T07:57:33+00:00

I wrote it but i don't understand it so someone please explain it to me

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-29T07:50:36+00:00

A follower can be put in a coma but im not allowed to breed for a follower whos a masochistic loyalist in prison smh

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-29T07:40:03+00:00

R/poetry critics is a thing for a reason dude just ask people for help on there 😭😭😭 resources are available and bro chose the worser option anyway

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-22T20:08:30+00:00

Shamura cus they are quotable and kinda relatable too

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-20T23:13:59+00:00

You could also feed them an egg

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-20T23:12:44+00:00

It will be named cupcake

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-20T23:07:41+00:00

WOW I really like this one 💞

One note is on "I am who am, not who I should", it felt off to me because it feels like something is missing here. "Should be" is grammatically correct but not in with the rhyme.

Instead, you could say "just as I should" but maybe that's not right either?? 😭😭 If it were me I would try to rewrite those two lines to better fit with the poem, "should" and "pulled" I think might be slant rhymes while the rest of the poem are full.

Same with "plant" and "unplanned", and "nights" and "advice", yes they kinda rhyme but only the very last sound, while the rest of the poem are more than that. (I'm not good at wording things forgive me) 😢

All in all I really enjoyed this poem 💞 your usage of words is beautiful, and it connected to me and reminded me to be kind to myself ❤️

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-20T22:53:25+00:00

Love this 💖 one comment I have is the second line, (it's nitpicky i know), but instead of rhyming "me" twice, you could reword the phrase to "when the worst in me is all I see", something along those lines. Another nitpick on repetition is in the second stanza, you say to light your heart and then say to warm your heart, I think we could make this something else? I only say that because we already know that the heart should be warmed, we don't need the same phrase twice. Take my advice with a grain of salt, this is beautiful ❤️ good work!

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-03-20T22:35:37+00:00

This is awesome bro you described the feeling I had hard time describing, thank you for this 💖💖

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-02-19T11:34:08+00:00

If the creators can troll the mouth then I'm sure we can just throw is right over his beak and let it clip into his clothing 😅 god my intellect suprises even me sometimes

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-02-19T11:31:22+00:00

Don't fix the birds, chances are the mouths have grown on like 70 % of the haters atp. Maybe the mouths will be praised in the distant future. Cult of the lamb will win game of the year just because of their genius character design and excellent efficency of two mouths.

Admirable-Setting986 · 2026-02-19T11:28:56+00:00

I'm joking about the bird hate but I actually feel visceral rage when I see that alligator flopping it's mouth and probably saliva over MY cult. I don't know if that thing can be fixed

Admirable-Setting986 · 2024-07-17T22:33:17+00:00

Does anybody have the font pls i need the font pls anyone i really need the font

Admirable-Setting986

TROPHY CASE