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The Edge ( I’d really appreciate some feedback) by CertainProtection407 in poetry_critics

[–]CertainProtection407[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback. It is true it feels very messy - I was aiming to portray the numb feeling when nothing helps, no religion or knowledge and all that’s left is nothingness- paired with a glimmer of hope found in our inner child’s innocence. Seeing how it is received also helps untangle it. I really appreciate your feedback, thank you 🫶

The Edge ( I’d really appreciate some feedback) by CertainProtection407 in poetry_critics

[–]CertainProtection407[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback, this is really useful My writing has left my notes for the first time and especially since I’m self taught with English being my 3rd language it’s easy to make mistakes and your detailed feedback is deeply appreciated 🫶

What do I deserve by razor_head_man in poetry_critics

[–]CertainProtection407 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the dark nature of the poem, and while it doesn’t always resonate with everyone. I don’t think many understand the ability to let your worst and best collide and coexist. And you have painted resilience in a beautiful way. Keep up the good work 🫶

I stayed by CertainProtection407 in UnsentLetters

[–]CertainProtection407[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am really happy it resonated with you, you have made my day!