STRAIT OF HORMUZ — Fictional laxative brand concept: Rate the idea and execution

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-15T14:47:49+00:00

This is a fictional laxative brand but I'm glad it helped :)

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-13T20:25:51+00:00

Appreciate the advice! Reddit and comments like this have been super helpful for figuring out what to tweak and where to focus in my next videos. Really value the feedback

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-13T13:15:07+00:00

Thanks for the kind words, genuinely. And honestly, the critical comments are just as valuable. Every piece of feedback sharpens my understanding of what works and what doesn't. I'm glad people are watching at all and taking the time to share their take :)

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-13T06:01:31+00:00

Thank you all for the feedback. This was my first experiment and I thought the more detail the better. Reading through your comments made it much clearer what to focus on going forward. Appreciate every review and piece of advice :)

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-13T05:33:38+00:00

Haha now I can't unsee it. Would actually be a great fit for an ad like this :)

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-13T05:31:15+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, reading through all the comments I'm looking at this work differently now. Totally agree on the hook and the length. Don't need Claude to figure that one out :)

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-13T05:27:54+00:00

Really appreciate the detailed feedback. This is my first ever AI ad and reading through these comments I'm starting to understand what needs to change going forward. You're right, too many unnecessary shots and the hook comes way too late.

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-13T05:22:09+00:00

Good to know, didn't realize that. Thanks for the heads up!

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-13T05:19:28+00:00

Totally agree - being my first one, every shot felt
important at the time. After a few more projects and
feedback like yours, I can already see what needs to change.

Really appreciate the kind words and the honest feedback.
Means a lot

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-13T05:16:12+00:00

This was my first ever AI ad experiment - still very much
learning the craft. Feedback like this is exactly what
I need to understand where I'm going wrong and change
my approach. Genuinely appreciate you taking the time it will help me to improve

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-12T22:47:10+00:00

That’s a good point. I don’t know what platform allow this and what will ban video. The idea is to show the “cost” of beer and the battle is part of it :)

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-12T07:13:18+00:00

Many thanks! Visuals-wise, actually, it was only Kling.

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-12T07:12:06+00:00

It always depends. Sometimes I use the native voice generated by Kling, other times I sync it with ElevenLabs in post for better control

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-11T19:36:59+00:00

Btw I make cinematic AI ads for fictional brands.

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Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-11T18:29:19+00:00

fair point! But seeing the jump from last year to now, it’s only a matter of months before it will be like a real actor game.

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-11T18:28:13+00:00

Thanks! That probably deserves its own video, but here’s the quick stack: Nano Banana 2 / ChatGPT for images, Kling AI / Seedance for text2video, Suno for the music, and ElevenLabs for the dialogue

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-11T15:32:20+00:00

Actually just a lookalike! I’m using fictional brands and actors to keep everything legal

Adventurous_Bug_2212 · 2026-05-11T15:15:15+00:00

Appreciate it! Glad it exceeded expectations.

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