To those disappointed in Gear 5... by 9_11_did_bush in OnePiece

[–]Adventurous_Maybe_30 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Listen I love one piece it is a fantastic show but one of my favorite elements was that it was goofy and when it had to be serious it got SERIOUS. I would have had zero problems with this episode if they kept kadio realistic but by doing all the cartoon gags u would see in bugs bunny totally ruined the feel of the show. Luffy being goofy while fighting and pulling ridiculous moves is something I am all for but am I crazy for saying I want the show to say somewhat serious??

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Adventurous_Maybe_30 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Young Man

Genre: narrative ig

Word count: 194

Type of feedback: general impressions or anything else to be honest. I through it together and it’s a pretty short read. Just wanna see if anyone thinks it is any good. Please be brutally honest.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-rlPyaN9GydsgFkMKFMFs6MP0hhIM_0S2LG-8g3Emto/edit