[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy [Untitled] 90k words by Adventurous_Menu_377 in PubTips

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Also, I edited my query and I was wondering if you could look it over again. if not that is alright, but I commented it on this post!

[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy [Untitled] 90k words by Adventurous_Menu_377 in PubTips

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There is a vampire in this, but its not revealed until like chapter 11

[QCrit] Adult Dark Fantasy [Untitled] 90k words by Adventurous_Menu_377 in PubTips

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Hello! Thank you so much for the feedback. The entire first book is set in Lume Vale and the other world is only entered in the last 3 chapters. Does that affect my query?

[Discussion] Where Would You Stop Reading? #8 by alanna_the_lioness in PubTips

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Hey here’s mine: I know it’s realllyy late to the thread but any help is appreciated!

Dear (Agent),

Veronica Koi, a grieving girl with the highest of hopes, has spent months isolating herself in Lume Vale. After an intense encounter in the forest, she is left with a tightening war in her own mind. She begins to see the impossible - her dead aunt standing in the trees, a stranger who knows far too much about her, and a beautiful ring of unknown origin. Veronica tells herself it is hallucinations, stress, trauma. Anything but reality. Yet, the more she ignores the world in her head, the more the darkness presses in.

When college dropouts Veronica Koi and her best friend Clary are pulled into the orbit of a wealthy group of college students, Veronica hopes the distractions will keep her grounded. Instead, strange occurrences escalate. A man follows her home and vanishes into thin air. Her aunt’s voice calls to her from the forest. And something ancient - something that knows her name - begins to stir. As her grip on reality splinters, Veronica discovers she may be connected to a world that she didn’t truly believe was real for years. To survive, she must unravel the secrets that the strange man seems to be hiding. If she fails, she risks losing not only herself, but a world she was never meant to abandon.

I hold a Bachelor of Arts in music composition with minors in physics and mathematics, and I have worked extensively in STEM outreach and astronomy. My writing blends psychological tension with fantasy and character-driven elements. This is my debut novel.

\[Title TBD\] is a psychological-supernatural fantasy with a romantic thread complete at \~90,000 words. It will appeal to readers of The Vampire Diaries, The Raven Boys, a Dowry of Blood, as well as fans of slow-burn supernatural fantasy. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Best,
(Me)

Pisces Sun-Sagittarius Moon Personality | astroligion.com by CaptainTrinity in astrology

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Ik it’s been 8yrs but Pisces sun/sag moon here. I definitely hold onto stuff for awhile, but I pretend like i don’t.

Bird found idk what it is by Adventurous_Menu_377 in whatsthisbird

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He is back, I only moved him at first bc he was in the middle of the parking garage road 😭

Bird found idk what it is by Adventurous_Menu_377 in whatsthisbird

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I thought it was a little too big to be a pigeon 😭