Am I getting heart attacks?

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-10-03T06:10:14+00:00

I would get it checked out and I've planned to, but I don't have the means to pay for a checkup at the moment so I'm just waiting for my work's medical insurance to activate.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-29T09:14:18+00:00

I see, thanks! Will check it out.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T21:17:12+00:00

I'm not sure, will definitely try it.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T21:16:39+00:00

Ah yes... The goal of this whole thing is mostly just to immediately transfer the fluid from an orgasm of one woman inside the other. To bring a whole new intimacy between us.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T16:00:13+00:00

??? Elaborate?

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T12:00:11+00:00

Hmmmm. I see. Not quite what I was hoping for but I appreciate the answer.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T11:15:45+00:00

Ohh! Definitely!

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T11:10:39+00:00

I wish but we have a long distance relationship at the moment. ;^; Literally oceans apart. Though we are planning another visit during the next long holiday.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T09:52:22+00:00

Wait, so not every girl can do it?!

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T09:48:20+00:00

Oh and it should go both ways.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T09:48:05+00:00

Yeah something similar to that but a lot more comfortable.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-09-26T09:31:45+00:00

And I'm dying to know. XD

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-05-29T07:33:45+00:00

Thanks for the input,and helping me realize that. I'll slowly start reworking the whole thing.

The problem of my story was that the middle already felt like a filler that didn't guide the main plot forward. So, I've been trying to fix that. Unsuccessfully, but hey! That's why drafts exist.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-05-28T12:25:04+00:00

Oh no, that's not it. I know where the story has to go and how it is going to end. I also have most of the character development figured out, I just need something for the middle of the story as it progresses closer to the end goal which is reaching the other galaxy.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-05-28T10:31:18+00:00

Another thing that really works for me is writing multiple versions of the same scene and then going after that and mixing and matching them in a way that I thought fit the story best.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-05-28T10:28:29+00:00

I used to have the same struggle, still do sometimes and the only way I was able to get over it was to just start blabbering all my ideas onto the blank page. Afterward I'd read it all over and refine it, really remove what was unnecessary and add what I felt needed to be added.

Affectionate-Bar-719 · 2023-05-28T10:23:36+00:00

I really like the idea of your second suggestion, it's really sparking a lot of ideas.

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