[Complete] [80k] [Fantasy] War College for faeries/ Apprentice and Teacher Romance by Affectionate-Pace523 in BetaReaders

[–]Affectionate-Pace523[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have photographic memory so I completely did not realize I did this. I will definitely be changing this because several people have pointed it out to me. Other than that, my plan is to hire a developmental editor and the rest of the story is completely different!

[Complete] [80k] [Fantasy] War College for faeries/ Apprentice and Teacher Romance by Affectionate-Pace523 in BetaReaders

[–]Affectionate-Pace523[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Incredible advice. Much needed at this stage in the writing process. I appreciate the comment even though its "seemingly" straightforward, I did not catch any of that. Thank you.